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Have you ever heard from the saying: All work and no 76．
play make Jack a dull boy?What this means is that if you 77．
study all the times you will become a boring person. You 78．
must go out and having fun with your friends, otherwise 79．
you will lose him. No one wants to be friends with the 80．
person who that only works and studies. Perhaps you have 81．
a confidence problem. Please try remember that the work 82．
you do is for yourself rather than for anyone else. You do 83．
not have to compete your classmates. No one can be 84．
happier in studying seven days and seven nights a week. 85．
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Dear Tracy，
Although I'm 1 6 years old，but my father still treats 76. _____
me as a careless children. He doesn’t value my opinions. 77. _ _____
He is very strict with me and often punishes me about 78. _ _____
leaving things lying around in the house while he did this 79. _ _____
all time. I think he fails to set an example to me to 80. _ _____
follow. But he often says：“Doing as I say，not as I do.” 81. _ _____
Even worse，he points out my past mistakes to guests， 82. _ _____
making me feel hurting. I love my father, but I can’t 83. _ _____
bear what he does. I have been tried many times 84. _ _____
to talk with he but he never listens. Please, help me. 85. _ _____
Puzzled
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Every morning Steve went to work by train. As he 76. _____________
has a long trip, he always buys newspaper. It helps 77. _____________
make the time passing more quickly. One Tuesday 78. _____________
morning, he turned over the sports page. He wanted 79. _____________
to see the report about an important football match 80. _____________
the night before. The report was so interesting that he
forgot to get off at his station. He did not know it unless 81. _____________
he saw the sea. He got off at the next station, and had to wait 82. _____________
a long time for a train to go back. It was no doubt that he arrived 83. _____________
late at the office. His boss was angry when Sieve told to him 84. _____________
why he was late. “Work is very important than football! ”. 85. _____________
he shouted.
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When my father bought me a computer as a birthday gift for 56. ________
me in last year, I felt very excited. As we all know, computers 57. ________
are getting more and more usefully now. Much information can 58. ________
be stored in them. We can also learn that has lately happened 59. ________
in the world on the internet. In the past, people had to do lots of 60. ________
work which was very dangerous. Now, but, computers can do it 61. ________
instead. When an exam is coming, I often did some exercises 62. ________
on my computer. Then it will correct it and tell me the right 63. ________
answers. In this way it is very convenient for me to prepare 64. ________
the exam than before. The computer has become my real friend. 65. ________
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In 10th April this year, as Li Ming was leaving his home in 76．
the morning, he got into the lift together a woman. When the lift 77．
got to the four floor, it stopped and a middle-aged 78．
man enter. Once the man got in, he snatched the woman’s 79．
handbag. He pulled both Li Ming and the woman out of the 80．
Lift. Li Ming ran downstairs. When he reached for the ground 81．
floor, he saw the man walked out. He told the caretaker 82．
at once and they both followed the thief to a restaurant 83．
nearby which they met two policemen. Li Ming told them all 84．
About the case and the thief has finally caught. 85．
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One day last week I went a walk in the country. 76.______________
In the morning the weather was well and the sun was 77. ______________
shining; the sky was blue and there were no could. 78. ______________
Soon a cool wind started blown and black clouds 79. ______________
were covered the sun and then it started to rain. 80. ______________
There were no houses in sight, but I got very wet. 81. ______________
After a hour or so, I managed to catch a bus which 82. ______________
took me home. But when I arrived I was shivering 83. ______________
and I knew I had caught a bad cold. I must 84. ______________
have taken my coat. I had nothing to do but to 85. ______________
stay at home and wait for a doctor.
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I visited my aunt in the countryside near the city last week.
I was surprised to see that great changes had been taken place 76.
in the countryside. Take my aunt’s family for example. We 77.
supply precious trees and flowers to the stores in the city and 78.
have over ten workers working for themselves. Their family’s 79.
income reached as much 100,000 yuan last year. Nor only 80.
did they have a house, a car and computers, they can also afford 81.
a trip abroad every year. When asking what else they needed 82.
most, they said that they wanted to learn a few English so that 83.
they could do business with foreigners directly. To their delighted, 84. .
my cousin can use that he has learned from university to help 85.
them with overseas trade.
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Women are playing a much important part in society than before 76．
Now women are working as teachers , scientists and even leaders 77．
Almost all jobs that used to be done by men is done perfectly 78．
well by women . Women are no longer looked down in society 79．
As the changes in their social role , women’s position in the family 80．
has been improved as well . That’s hard to find the wife is busy while 81．
the husband is sitting in an armchair, watches TV. In spite of all 82．
these changes , the great number of men still guard their rights . 83．
Sometimes few women are allowing to attend important meetings 84．
This is the problem we should try to solve it now 85．
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Hi
Thank you for your e-mail ! You asked me about my friends and how 76．
we like to do . Well , I guess I do what most people to do . I like reading 77．
books , watching films and listen to music . My favourite sport is volley- 78．
ball. Most of my friends play volleyball together with me . My best 79．
friend is two years elder than me .She goes to a different school , but 80．
we always get together after school to talk and have funs . We some- 81．
times do homework together .What about yourself ? Tell me something 82．
about yourself , your friends and what you like to do . I had also like to 83．
know something about China . We have read China in school and I am 84．
very interesting in learning more about it . Please e-mail me soon ! 85．
Lisa
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Here is a photo which I’ve kept for many years . Look , the
child in it is me . Do you think it that it that I was very lovely ? Yes . 76．
You see , I was making a face . There was a hat on my head 77．
while there were no shoes on my foot . I asked my mother how 78．
old I was them . Mother said that I was three years old in that 79．
Time . Can you see the house all making of wood ? The house 80．
which was new then , but it is very old now . I was born in this 81．
old house and lived here for eighteen years . I like living here , 82．
because there were many friendly neighbours we get along very 83．
good with each other , but it’s a great pity that We will move away 84．
soon . To tell a truth , I really can’t bear to part from them . 85．
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When Father bought me a computer for a birthday present 76.____________
in last year, I felt very excited. As we all know, computers 77. ____________
are getting more usefully nowadays. Much information 78. ____________
can be stored in it. We can learn what has lately happened 79. ____________
in the world on the Internet. People had to do lots of work 80. ____________
which was very danger. Now, computers can do it instead. 81. ____________
When an exam is come, I do exercises on my computer. 82. ____________
Then it will correct them but tell me the right answers. 83. ____________
It is convenient for me to prepare for the exam than 84. ____________
before. The computer have become a real friend of mine. 85. ____________
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Good morning, everyone. Yesterday I received a letter from
a elderly gentleman. He told me the other day he saw 76. __________
that some student in our school uniform crowded onto a 77. __________
bus without waiting their turns. On the bus they refuse 78. __________
to offer their seats for old people. What was worse, they 79. __________
even said dirty words to each other. I am very much sorry 80. __________
for this. Today’s youth are tomorrow’s old people. Respect 81. __________
the old and caring for the young is a fine tradition of our 82. __________
Chinese. Every one of us have the responsibility to keep it 83. __________
up. I hope that you can learn something from this incident 84. __________
and you will have good manners whether you are inside or 85. __________
outside the school. Thank you.
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Hello!
I’m Hannah, is the former Editor of Kiwibox’s Life & People section. 76．
I’ve now moved and became the Senior Editor of Books & School. 77．
A little about me you may not know: I am 17- year – old high school 78．
junior from Arizona. I’ve been on Kiwibox for January of 2004, 79．
which I became a reporter. Outside of Kiwibox, my hobbies include 80．
music, writing and just hanging out and try to get through high school. 81．
I’m really happily to be a part of the Books & School section. 82．
I love to read and write, so book reviews are always a lot of funs. 83．
If you have any questions or comments about this section, I’d 84．
love to answer it. You can reach me at gingermulatta. 85．
Hannah
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Henry Royce did not like his car, that ran badly and 76．________________
often broke up. So he decided to make better car himself, 77．_______________
and in 1904 he produced his first new model. Charles Rolls, 78．________________
a car maker, was very interesting in Royce’s car, and soon 79．_______________
Rolls and Royce go into business together. One of their first 80．_______________
model was the Silver Ghost. In 1907, a Silver Ghost broke 81．_______________
the world’s record by drive 14,371 miles without breaking 82．_______________
down once. After the drive, it was cost just over ￡2 to put 83．_______________
the car back into perfect condition.
This is not surprising that 84．_______________
the Silver Ghost was regarded “the best car in the world”. 85．_______________
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How much times do you spend with your parents? 76．
When did you last tell them what is on your mind? 77．
Your parents are your dearest people in the world 78．
when you are young. And they always care of you 79．
deep. But even though many children still love 80．
their mum and dad, families may become more close 81．
as you get older. The end of the year is a time for families 82．
to get together. Have you ever thought what you can 83．
show your parents that you love them? Find chance 84．
and do something for them or to have a sincere talk with 85．
them. If you can do this, your parents will be very happy.
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“Practice makes perfect” was an old saying . It tells us that it 76．
does not any matter if we are slow at doing something . As 77．
long as we keep on trying and practice , we’ll do a good job 78．
in the end . The saying is especial useful in English study . 79．
Since a student is poor at speaking , he should grasp every 80．
chance to open mouth and speak English . His oral English 81．
may be excellent one day due to his hard works . Not only is 82．
the saying useful in English study , it is also helpful in our 83．
daily life . To an extent , it is no short cut in doing everything 84．
since key to success lies in “Practice makes perfect”. 85．
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At a Friday night, a poor young artist stood at the gate of the 76.______
subway station and played his violin with large piece of paper on 77._____
the ground．Before long , he was surrounding with people, who 78._______
were all attracted by the word on that paper. It said,“ last night, 79_______
a gentleman put an important thing into my hat by mistaken. Please 80._____
come to claim it soon.” Seeing this , people wondered why it could 81.____
be. After about half an hour, a man came and brought back his lottery 82______
which won a prize of ＄500,000. Later someone asked the violinist: 83._____
“ Why don’t you take the lottery ticket for yourself? ”He said, 84._____
“While I don’t have much money, I live happily. However , I lose 85._____
honesty, I won’t be happy forever.”
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“Ding-ling-ling…” the bell rang, announced the end of 76._____________
school. One by one, the students left their school or went 77. _____________
home. Some rode their bike, some went by bus, and others 78. _____________
went on foot. On the way, John saw one of her classmates 79. _____________
riding a bike. He asked him take him home on his bike. 80. _____________
When they came to a crossing, an accident was happened. 81. _____________
A big red truck moved quickly up to them. John was so 82. _____________
frightened that he jumped off the bike all of sudden. The 83. _____________
truck knocked him onto the ground. He was terrible injured 84. _____________
and sent to hospital at once. That is important for us all to 85. _____________
follow the traffic regulations for our own safety.
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A few months after returning the US from Germany, I took 76. _______
part in a college course in French. Since I have learned to 77. _______
speak German good in Germany, I thought that it might be 78. _______
interested to begin studying another language. At the first 79. _______
class, the teacher asked us to do a pronunciation exercise, 80. _______
in which he would say one word or two in French, and each 81. _______
student would do their best to copy. When he got to me, he 82. _______
kept having me to say more words, and I finally asked him 83. _______
why. "I find it great funs. It's the first time I've heard an 84. _______
American speak French with a German accent." he explained it. 85. _______
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One day I happened to find a chatting room on 76．
my QQ, there people were chatting in English . I tried 77．
to chat with some of them . To my surprised . I found 78．
the oral English of some junior students were better 79．
than me . I asked them for advice and they told me 80．
to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I 81．
would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. 82．
Day by day I learned from many useful words and 83．
expressions . With time went by , I found that I could 84．
even communicate some college students freely . 85．
参考答案
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76．from —of/about 77．make—makes 78．times—time 79．having—have
80．him—them 81．that 82．try后加to 83．正确 84．compete加against/with
85．happier—happy
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76.去掉but 77.children→child 78.about→for 79.did→does 80.在all后加the
81.Doing→Do 82.√ 83.hurting→hurt 84.去掉been 85.he→him
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76. went →goes 77. newspaper前面加 a 78. passing →pass 79. over →to
80. see →read 81. unless →until 82. √ 83. It 改为There 84. 去掉to
85. very →more
4
56.去掉me 57. 去掉in 58. usefully— useful
59. that —what 60. 正确 61. but—however
62.did—do 63.第二个it—them 64. very—more 65. the前加for
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77．together后加with 78．four改为fourth 79．enter 改为 entered
80．pulled改为pushed 81．for去掉 82．walked 改为walking 83．正确
84．which改为where 85．has改为was
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76. went/→for go后可以接v－ing; to do sth.; for sth.
77. well→fine/nice well作“健康”讲是adj.，作“好”讲是adv.。
78．could→clouds应该用复数，否则为…was not a cloud
79．blown→blowing start后可以接to do或doing.
80．去掉were此处应该用主动语态
81．but→so前后为因果关系。
82．第一个a→an略。
83．√
84．must→should, must have done表示现在对过去的推测；should have done表示过去该做的事而没有做，且带有责备意味。
85．去掉第二个to but前面有do的不同形式时，后面的不定式不带to。
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I visited my aunt in the countryside near the city last week.
I was surprised to see that great changes had been taken place 76. been .
in the countryside. Take my aunt’s family for example. We 77. They .
supply precious trees and flowers to the stores in the city and 78. √ .
have over ten workers working for themselves. Their family’s 79. them .
income reached as much ∧100,000 yuan last year. Nor only 80. as .
did they have a house, a car and computers, they can also afford 81. do .
a trip abroad every year. When asking what else they needed 82. asked .
most, they said that they wanted to learn a few English so that 83. little .
they could do business with foreigners directly. To their delighted, 84. delight .
my cousin can use that he has learned from university to help 85. what .
them with overseas trade.
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76. much 改成more 或much 后加more 77. √ 78. is 改成are
79.down 后加upon/on 80. As 改成With 81. That’s 改成It’s
82. watches 改成watching 83. the 改成a 84. allowing 改成allowed
85. 去掉it
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76.how改为what 77. 删去people后面的to 78.listen改为listening
79.正确 80.elder改为older 81.funs改为fun
82.yourself改为you 83.had改为would 84. read后加上about
85. interesting改为interested
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76. 去掉第2个it 77. 正确 78. foot—feet 79.in —at
80. making —made 81.去掉which 82. and 后加have 83. were—are
84. good—well 85. a —the
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76.for→as 77.去掉in 78.usefully→useful 79.it→them 80.√ 81.danger→dangerous 82.come→coming 83.but→and 84.convenient前加more 85. have→has
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Good morning, everyone. Yesterday I received a letter from
a elderly gentleman. He told me the other day he saw 76. an
that some student in our school uniform crowded onto a 77. students
bus without waiting their turns. On the bus they refuse 78. refused
to offer their seats for old people. What was worse, they 79. to
even said dirty words to each other. I am very much sorry 80. much
for this. Today’s youth are tomorrow’s old people. Respect 81. Respecting
the old and caring for the young is a fine tradition of our 82. us
Chinese. Every one of us have the responsibility to keep I 83. has
up. I hope that you can learn something from this incident 84. √
and∧you will have good manners whether you are inside or 85. that
outside the school. Thank you.
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76．is the →the 77．became→become 78．17—year—old→a 17—year—old
79．for→since 80．which→when 81．try→trying 82．happily→happy
83．funs→fun 84．√ 85．it→them
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76．that—which 77．a ^ better 78．Right
79．interesting—interested 80．go—went
81．model—models 82．drive—driving
83．Without “was” 84．This—It
85．regarded ^ as (considered)
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76. time---times 77. is---was 78. correct 79. of---for
80. deep---deeply 81.more---less 82.you---they 83.what---how
84.a^chance 85.去掉to
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“Practice makes perfect” was an old saying . It tells us that it 76． is
does not any matter if we are slow at doing something . As 77． any
long as we keep on trying and practice , we’ll do a good job 78． practcing
in the end . The saying is especial useful in English study . 79．especially
Since a student is poor at speaking , he should grasp every 80． If
chance to open ∧mouth and speak English . His oral English 81． his
may be excellent one day due to his hard works . Not only is 82． work
the saying useful in English study , it is also helpful in our 83． √
daily life . To an extent , it is no short cut in doing everything 84． there
since ∧key to success lies in “Practice makes perfect”. 85．the
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76.第一个at改为on 77.with后加a 78.surrouning改为surrounded 79.word改为words
80.mistaken改为mistake 81.why改为what 82.brought改为took 83.正确 84.don’t改为didn’t 85.if后加I
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“Ding-ling-ling…” the bell rang, announced the end of 76.announcing或在announced前加which
school. One by one, the students left their school or went 77. and
home. Some rode their bike, some went by bus, and others 78. bikes
went on foot. On the way, John saw one of her classmates 79. his
riding a bike. He asked him / take him home on his bike. 80. to
When they came to a crossing, an accident was happened. 81. was
A big red truck moved quickly up to them. John was so 82. √
frightened that he jumped off the bike all of / sudden. The 83. a
truck knocked him onto the ground. He was terrible injured 84. terribly
and sent to hospital at once. That is important for us all to 85. It
follow the traffic regulations for our own safety.
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76. returning ∧àto 77. haveàhad 78.goodàwell 79.interestedàinteresting
80.√ 81. oneàa 82. theiràhis 83. 去掉to
84. funsàfun 85. 去掉it
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76. right 77. there—where 78. surprised—surprise
79. were—was 80. me—mine 81. But —So
82. practise—practising 83. without ‘from’
84. As—With or went-going 85. communicate∧with