2019年度高考英语人教版必修三课堂要点精析讲义：Unit1SectionⅤWriting—叙事类记叙文 3页

Section_ⅤWriting—__叙事类记叙文 本单元的写作任务是写一篇叙事类记叙文。该类作文以叙述事件为主，要通过完整的故事情节和生动形象的语言，使读者在享受故事情节的同时有所感悟。写作时要注意把记叙文的六要素：时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果等交代清楚。‎ 一、基本结构 ‎1．开头——交代清楚事件的背景。‎ ‎2．主体——主要叙述事件的发生、经过及结果。‎ ‎3．结尾——呼应标题，发表感想、愿望等。‎ 二、注意事项 ‎1．标题：如有标题，标题一定要明确，能点明事件或主题。‎ ‎2．人称：通常用第一人称和第三人称。‎ ‎3．时态：在叙事过程中，一般用过去时态。在描写背景或某景象时，常用过去进行时，这样显得更加生动形象。‎ ‎ 三、增分佳句 ‎1．Although it happened three years ago, I never forgot the evening party.‎ ‎2．Last week I had an amusing experience.‎ ‎3．I was walking in the street when ...‎ ‎4．When we arrived, they gave us a warm welcome.‎ ‎5．At last, they saw us off and said goodbye.‎ ‎6．We had a good time.‎ ‎7．I learnt a lot from it.‎ ‎8．If it had not been for Li Hua, I would have got wet through.‎ ‎[题目要求]‎ 假如你是李华，请根据下面五幅图画写一篇短文介绍你和家人庆祝春节的经过。‎ 参考词汇：the Spring Festival Gala 春晚 ‎ the Lunar New Year Eve除夕夜 第一步：审题构思很关键 一、审题 ‎1．确定体裁：本文是叙事类记叙文；‎ ‎2．确定人称：本文的主要人称为第一人称；‎ ‎3．确定时态：主要使用一般过去时为主。‎ 二、构思 开头：总述春节的概况。‎ 主体：具体描述春节的经过。‎ 结尾：提出自己的希望和期盼。‎ 第二步：核心词汇想周全 ‎1．full_of_fun　　　　　　　　充满乐趣 ‎2．be_drowned_in 沉浸在……‎ ‎3．admire 欣赏 ‎4．set_off 燃放；引爆 ‎5．celebrate 庆祝 ‎6．look_forward_to 盼望 第三步：由词扩句雏形现 ‎1．我们聚集在一起，吃了一顿丰盛的晚餐。‎ We_all_gathered_around and had a big dinner.‎ ‎2．然后，春节联欢晚会开始了。‎ The__Spring_Festival_Gala_followed_then.‎ ‎3．据报道春晚相当精彩。‎ It_was_reported_that the Spring Festival Gala was wonderful/really a hit.‎ ‎4．许多明星都在舞台上露面，他们给我们带来了如此多的乐趣以至于我们都沉浸其中，欣赏他们的表演。‎ Many stars turned_up_on_the_stage and they brought us so much pleasure that we_were_all_drowned_in admiring their performances.‎ ‎5．午夜时分，我们燃放鞭炮庆祝新年的到来。‎ The midnight saw us setting_off_the_fireworks_to_celebrate the beginning of a new year.‎ ‎6. 黎明时，我们盛装打扮，挨家挨户的拜年。‎ At dawn, we_all_dressed_up_and_paid_a_visit door to door.‎ 第四步：句式升级造亮点 ‎1．用现在分词短语作伴随状语改写句1‎ We_all_gathered_around_having_a_big_dinner.‎ ‎2．用全部倒装句改写句2‎ Then_followed_the_Spring_Festival_Gala.‎ ‎3．用as引导的非限制性定语从句改写句3‎ As_was_reported,_the_Spring_Festival_Gala_was_wonderful/really_a_hit.‎ ‎4．用现在分词作状语改写句4‎ Many_a_star_turned_up_on_the_stage,_bringing_us_so_much_pleasure_that_we_were_all_drowned_in_admiring_their_performances. ‎ 第五步：过渡衔接联成篇 The_Spring_Festival_was_really_full_of_fun._First,_on_the_Lunar_New_Year_Eve,_we_all_gathered_around_having_a_big_dinner._Then_followed_the_Spring_Festival_Gala._As_was_reported,_the_Spring_Festival_Gala_was_really_a_hit._Many_a_star_turned_up_on_the_stage,_bringing_us_so_much_pleasure_that_we_were_all_drowned_in_admiring_their_performances._The_midnight_saw_us_setting_off_the_fireworks_to_celebrate_the_beginning_of_a_new_year._Then_we_ate_dumplings._At_dawn,_we_all_dressed_up_and___paid_a_visit_door_to_door_at_dawn._We_do_hope_we_will_have_a_good_luck_in_the_following_new_year_and_we_also_do_look__forward_to_realizing__all_our_dreams.‎