2018届二轮复习短文改错学生困惑的解题出路（16张ppt） 16页

2018 届二轮复习短文改错学生困惑的解题出路 我们的困惑 看不出哪里有错，感觉怎么读都是对的 --- 我平时就是这么表达的啊 看得出有错，但不知道怎么改 --- 越改越错 Any strategies ？ Any shortcuts? Any rules ？ 五改 四不改 忠实原文原则 虚词以增减为主原则 单词拼写 词序 大小写 标点符号 改动最少原则 一对一原则 实词以改动为主原则 短文改错是 词 的 改动 、 增加 、 删减 。 十种词性口诀： 名动形副 叹 数代介连冠 短文改错类型： 1. n. 2. v. 3. adj./ adv. 4. num. 5. pron. 6. prep. 7. conj. 8. article 9. logic---- 行文逻辑 短文改错简析 一对一原则 1.n. 考点： 可数名词单复数、不可数名词、名词词性、名词所有格、主谓一致 e.g. 1. After Emperor Young John (Yongzheng), every emperors of Qing Dynasty took the policy of banning opium( 鸦片 ). 2. I guess when people saw Lin Zexu burning opium, they would have all held their breathe. emperor breath 考点： e.g. 1. Every year when the National Day is coming, she feel very proud because her husband is named Jianguo. 2. Zhou Enlai is said to be the most handsome premier of China, which could be seen from the picture below. can 主谓一致、时态、语态、非谓语动词 2. v. feels 考点： 比较级 / 最高级 , 修饰功能 e.g. – Of the two people Chen Duxiu and Li Dazhao, who do you think is the most awesome one? – The answer is definite Li “Dazhao”. more definitely 3. adj./adv. 4.num. 考点： 基数词、序数词、分数的表达、固定用法 e.g. Two third of the teachers in our class are men. thirds 5. pron. 考点： 指示代词、人称代词、物主代词、不定代词、反身代词、代词格、 作形式主语和形式宾语的 it 的漏用 e.g. I find hard to speak with my mouth full. it 6. prep. 考点： prep 的含义、用法及固定搭配 e.g. I’m looking forward in your reply. to 考点： e.g. 1. The ladies were talking about shopping while they heard a scream. 2. One day our history teacher gently went to Li Wanying, asking her that she could do him a favour. when whether/if 7. conj. 并列句、状语从句、定语从句、名词性从句 e.g. Last term Mo Xuemin played basketball with her classmates, and fortunately he hurt his right foot. unfortunately 9. logic 8. article 考点： a/an/the 的使用 e.g. Karl Marx, an European communist, loved his wife Jenny deeply. a his 总结 Now let’s do some exercises! 1. Great changes have been taken place in my hometown with the development of economy. 2. Open i-Pad classrooms is a right choice. 3. My biggest problem is that I can’t speak English fluently, and which is the reason why I lack confidence in my oral English. 4. We can communicate each other so that we were able to get more useful ideas from our partner. 5. English is the first language in the world, so I must improve my English as much as possibly. opening that/this with The following sentences are from your compositions. Please correct the mistakes for yourselves.( ≤2 mistakes in each sentence ) possible are Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood he missed us just as many as we missed him. on has health what his a stepped pictures much 短文改错 固定搭配错误 连词多余 主谓不一致 词性错误 表语从句引导词错误 物主代词错误 冠词缺失，固定搭配 时态错误 名词单复数误用 副词误用 你编 我改 Your tasks are to: first set 5 different kinds of mistakes ( no more than 2 in each sentence) in the passage you get, then copy a new one and exchange it with your partner, and finally correct all the mistakes in the new passage you get. Student A: A lonely old man wanted to dig up his potato garden, but he was too old to do it. So he wrote a letter to his only son, who was in prison, and told him about the problem. Soon the old man received a letter:" Dad, don't dig up the garden! That's where I buried the guns!" Student B: At 4 a.m. the next morning, some policemen came and dug up the whole garden, but they found no guns. The old man was surprised and wrote another letter to his son, telling him what had happened and asking him what to do next. His son's reply was: "Just go ahead and plant your potatoes, Dad. " 你编 我改 set copy exchange & correct check Thank you!