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2018届 二轮复习 写作专题：咨询信
文体概述
咨询信是写信人对某方面的信息感兴趣，希望了解详细信息的信件。通常包括三部分内容：
1.
说明自己的计划或目的，也就是询问信息的原因。
2.
征询具体信息。
3.
期待回复并表示感谢。
常用语块
1.
寻求帮助
_______________________
2.
向某人提供某物
_______________________
3.
首先
_______________________
4.
盼望着
_______________________
5.
更多的信息
_______________________
further information
ask for help
provide sb. with sth
.
to start with
look forward to
6.
即将到来
_______________________
7.
为
……
向某人收取费用
_______________________
8.
为
……
而表示感激之情
_______________________
9.
对
……
来说很重要
_______________________
10.
寄回
_______________________
post back
round the corner
charge sb. for…
be grateful for…
be important to…
11.
对
……
感兴趣
_______________________
12.
参加
_______________________
13.
决心要做某事
_______________________
14.
希望
…… _______________________
15.
缺乏
/
缺少
_______________________
be short of/be in lack/demand of
be interested in…/take interest in…
take part in/participate in
make up one’s mind to do sth.
in the hope of/that
套用句式
如果能给我提供
……
方面的信息我将不胜感激。
2.
我写信是想知道您能否给我提供有关
……
的信息。
1. I would be most grateful if you could send me information regarding/concerning…
2. I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding…
3.
此外，有没有我要特别注意的事情？
4.
您能告诉我
……
吗？
5.
期待您及时答复。
3. Besides, is there anything that I should pay special attention to?
4. Would you be so kind as to tell me…?
5. I am looking forward to your immediate response.
习作修改
(
做短文改错，背经典范文
)
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a student in China or I plan to go to
Britain to attend summer school during the
vacation. I had seen your advertisement, and
I would like to know anything more about
your six-week English course.
and
∧
a
have
something
First where will the course start and how many
class hour are there per week? Beside, I wish there
would not be too many students in a class. What I would also like to know how much I have to pay to
the course and whether accommodation is including. Would there be host family or
university dormitory?
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
when
hours
Besides
for
included
1. or →and
两句之间是“顺承”关系，而非“选择”关系。
2.
在
summer
前加
a
单数可数名词前用不定冠词表泛指。
3. had →have
根据上下文语境，此处应用现在完成时。
4. anything →something
肯定句中要用
something
。
5. where →when
根据上下文逻辑，此处应该是表示“什么时候”的疑问句。故填
when
。
6. hour →hours
因为
how many
后须用名词的复数形式。
7. Beside →Besides
此处表示补充说明关系“此外
/
而且”，
beside
意为“在
……
旁边”。
8.
去掉
I would also
前的
What
后面是一个完整的句子，
What
在此显然是多余的。
9. to →for
固定短语
pay for
意为“为
……
付费”。
10. including →included
此处为被动结构，意为“
……
包含在内”。
课堂练习
假定你是李华，最近你在当地报纸上看到一则游泳培训班的广告，称其有称职教练
(instructor)
，一周包会。你会一点游泳，但水性不太好，想在暑假参加训练。请你写一封咨询信了解相关情况，要点如下：
1.
训练的具体时间和地点。
2.
条件和费用。
3.
其他特别注意的事项。
注意：
1.
词数
100
左右。
2.
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.
开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I have read your advertisement in the newspaper
. You
mentioned in
it that your instructors are fully
qualified
and you
ensure that
learners will be able to swim well after one week’s training.
I can swim a little but I’m not very confident in the water. So I
’m interested in taking part in
the training course. Fortunately, the summer holiday is
around the corner.
I’m writing to
inquire
when and where the course will be given, and how long the training course will last each day.
I also want to know how much you will charge me for that.
Besides, would you
be so kind as to tell
me whether there is anything special that should be prepared or does your company provide everything necessary?
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
课外作业
假定你是李华，寒假中你去澳大利亚旅游，可是回国后发现你的相机落在旅馆了，所以你要给旅馆负责人写一封咨询信。要点如下：
1.
入住时间：
1
月
27
日～
2
月
5
日；房间号：
608
。
2.
相机：型号
Canon Ixus860
，白色；你的
17
岁生日礼物，很重要。
3.
请他
/
她帮你寻找并寄回，表示感谢。
4.
你的地址在信封上。
注意
：
1.
词数
100
左右。
2.
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.
开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am very grateful for your great service while staying at your hotel, but
I’m writing to
ask for your help with sending back
my camera that I
left
in your hotel.
I
checked in
on January 27 and
out
on February 5 and stayed in Room 608
for the whole time
. Perhaps because I left
in such a rush
for the airport, I
made the mistake of leaving
my camera in the room.
Since it was a gift from my parents on my 17th birthday, it’s very important to me. It’s a white Canon Ixus860. I would
be very grateful if you could
help me find it.
If found
, the camera can be
posted back to
me by using the address on the envelope.
I am looking forward to your early reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua