【英语】2020届二轮复习书面表达训练学案之四书信（信人际关系） 5页

‎2020届二轮复习书面表达训练学案之四书信（信+人际关系）‎ 范文学习 ‎ Dear Linda,‎ How is everything going with you? I’ve returned to Shanghai, tired but happy. I can’t thank you enough for all the kindness you offered during my stay in New Zealand.‎ When I first got there, I found it hard to use English properly. It was you who always helped me with patience. Now I have made such great progress that I can speak English more fluently. I even have a larger vocabulary than before. I am not scared of English any more. ‎ When I was homesick, you kept me company, chatting, playing games or showing me around the scenic spots. You made me feel as if I were one of your family members. There are so many wonderful memories fresh in my mind. ‎ In addition, please remember me to your parents. Best wishes!‎ Yours Li Hua 假定你是李华，你结束了在新西兰的英语学习，刚回到上海。请给你的新西兰好友Linda写一封信，感谢她期间对你的帮助，要点如下：‎ ‎1. 写信的原因；‎ ‎2. 叙述自己在新西兰期间所得 到的具体帮助；‎ ‎ 1) 英语学习上的;进步 ‎ 2）生活上的；‎ ‎3. 表达良好的祝愿。‎ 注意： 1. 词数100左右; ‎ ‎2.可适当增加细节。‎ 范文抄写：‎ 句型提示：‎ ‎1、书信功能句：‎ ‎2、英语作文万能句：‎ ‎1）I am writing to you to …(谈写信目的)‎ ‎ 2) I am looking forward to your reply. （写信结束语）‎ ‎ 3) I would appreciate it if you could … 如果你能…，我将非常感激。‎ ‎ 4) I wonder if you could … 我想您是否能….‎ ‎ 5) Would it be possible for you to …? 您是否可以。。。？‎ ‎ 6) Would it be convenient for you to …? 您是否方便…?‎ ‎ 7) I would like to … 我想要…‎ ‎ 8) It would be better for you to … 您最好…‎ ‎ 9) You might as well … 您最好…‎ ‎ 10) If I were you, I would …. 如果我是你，我会…‎ ‎ 11） Would you please …? Could you …? 请您…‎ ‎3、英语作文常用句式：‎ ‎ 1) 主+谓+…,doing/done …‎ ‎ 2) 主+谓+…,which/who 从句 ‎ 3）主，同位语，+谓+…‎ ‎ 4）主+谓+…,with 结构 ‎ 5）What +从句 is that 从句 ‎ 6）强调句或倒装句（起强调作用，需要强调时，用）‎ ‎ 7）其他：so/such …that…; It is …before …; too … to …等 作文仿写 ‎ 写作训练（4）‎ ‎ 假定你是来自英国的旅游者约翰.史密斯， 现用英语给十中的校长写一封感谢信， 内容如下：‎ ‎1.昨天你在公园游览时丢失钱包，里面有很多钱，还有护照和机票。‎ ‎2.当晚有一个男孩找到你的房间，送还拾到的钱包。你想给钱他作为感谢，被他拒绝。‎ ‎3.你从宾馆经理那里获悉，他是十中的学生，名叫李华。‎ 注意;‎ ‎1. 词数100左右； ‎ ‎2. 可适当增加细节使行文连贯；‎ ‎3. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计 ‎ ‎ 入总词数。‎ 思路点拨：1、人称：第一人称为主；时态：一般过去时为主；2、要点：1）简单自我介绍；2）丢失钱包的经历；3）李华送还钱包的经历；4）表示对李华和校长的感谢。‎ 参考句型：1. It was his help and kindness that made my trip here special and enjoyable; 2. I can’t thank you enough for …‎ 第一稿 Dear Sir. ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 第二稿 Dear Sir ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 第三稿 Dear Sir ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ 参考范文：‎ Dear Sir,‎ I am John Smith, a tourist from the UK. I am writing to express my gratitude/thanks to a student named Li Hua in your school. ‎ Yesterday I visited the park and had a wonderful time there. But when I returned to the hotel, I found my wallet missing. There was a lot of money in it, and above all, there was also my passport and flight ticket. Naturally I was very worried. In the evening, the hotel manager brought a boy to my room. The boy handed me my wallet. I thanked him and offered him some money as a reward. But he politely refused and ‎ left the hotel without leaving his name. Fortunately, from the manager, I found out who the young boy was. ‎ I can’t thank Li Hua enough because it was his help and kindness that made my trip here special and enjoyable. ‎ Best wishes for you and the school. ‎ Yours,‎ John Smith