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2019 届二轮复习 短文改错 10 篇训练之四
[一]
I was working in a beer company,helped the president do something important. At the same
time,my mother was in the final stages of the—— cancer. I worked during the day and drive 40
miles home to be with her every night. It was tired,but it was that I want to do. I didn’t want ∧
to
bother the president with my trouble,yet I felt someone at the company needed to know about
it. So I told a friend and asked him not to share the information with someone. However,the
president called me into his office one day. He faced me from across her large desk,looked at me
and said,“Alice,I hear your mother is very ill.” I was caught by a—— surprise and burst into
tears. He just gentle said a sentence I will never forget:“Whatever you need.”
参考答案
I was working in a beer company, helped
helping the president do something important. At the
same time,my mother was in the final stages of the—— cancer. I worked during the day and
drive
drove 40 miles home to be with her every night. It was tired
tiring,but it was that
what I want to do.I
didn’t want ∧
to bother the president with my trouble,yet I felt someone at the company needed
to know about it. So I told a friend and asked him not to share the information with
someone
anyone .However,the president called me into his office one day. He faced me from across her
his
large desk,looked at me and said,“Alice,I hear your mother is very ill.” I was caught by
a—— surprise and burst into tears. He just gentle
gently said a sentence I will never forget:“Whatever
you need.”
[二]
Today we had the honor of invite Professor Smith to give us an English lesson. All of us
were deeply impressing by this unforgettable English lesson. The professor began the class in an
amusing English story,which attracted our attention at once. He spoke slowly and clearly so that
we could follow him well. Great inspired,most of us took an active part in classroom activities.
After class,many students being——interviewed spoke highly of him. They said never before
have they experienced such interesting a class. From his lesson,we came to conclusion that it
is not so difficult to learn English whether we find a good way.
参考答案
Today we had the honor of invite
inviting Professor Smith to give us an English lesson. All of us
were deeply impressing
impressed by this unforgettable English lesson. The professor began the class
in
with an amusing English story,which attracted our attentions
attention at once. He spoke slowly and
clearly so that we could follow him well. Great
Greatly inspired , most of us took an active part in
classroom activities. After class,many students being—— interviewed spoke highly of him.
They said never before have
had they experienced such
so interesting a class. From his lesson,we
came to ∧
a conclusion that it is not so difficult to learn English whether
if we find a good
way.
[三]
John Janson,a seventeenyearsold teenager,was honoured at the Lifesaver Awards last night. He
was presented with his award at a ceremony which recognizing the bravery of ten people. All of us
had saved the life of another. John was studying in his room while he heard screaming. He
discover that Anne Slade,mother of three,had been stabbed repeated with a knife. This was
John’s quick action and knowledge of first aid that had saved Ms.Slade’s life. He is proud of
that he did.It shows that a knowledge of first aid can make real difference.
答案
John Janson,a seventeenyears
year old teenager,was honoured at the Lifesaver Awards last night.
He was presented with his award at a ceremony which recognizing
recognized the bravery of ten people. All
of us
them had saved the life of another. John was studying in his room while
when he heard screaming.
He discover
discovered that Anne Slade,mother of three,had been stabbed repeated
repeatedly with a knife.This
It
was John’s quick action and knowledge of first aid that had saved Ms. Slade’s life. He is proud
of that
what he did.It shows that a knowledge of first aid can make
∧
a real difference.
[四]
I like music very much,pop songs particularly. Every evening then I am doing homework
and at weekends when I at home,I always play some of my favorite songs on my tape recorder.
The familiar patterns of notes attracts me into the colourfully world of music. Now and then I
stopped to follow the songs. Sometimes,my mother comes in,asking me to fix my attention to my
homework. She does not like the—— pop music. Like most grownups,she enjoys folk songs,
because the peaceful music reminds her of their beautiful life when she was young. It is a truth
which people of different age understand music differently and enjoy different kinds of music.
参考答案
I like music very much,pop songs particularly. Every evening then
when I am doing homework
and at weekends when I ∧
am at home,I always play some of my favorite songs on my tape
recorder. The familiar patterns of notes attracts
attract me into the colourfully
colourful/colorful world of music.
Now and then I stopped
stop to follow the songs. Sometimes,my mother comes in,asking me to fix
my attention to
on my homework. She does not like the—— pop music. Like most grownups,
she enjoys folk songs,because the peaceful music reminds her of their
her beautiful life when she
was young. It is a truth which
that people of different age
ages understand music differently and enjoy
different kinds of music.
[五]
I can well remember an incident that happened on a rain Sunday afternoon. I was waiting for
the green lights that a girl of about ten was knocked down by a pass car. The car then drives off
quickly. A man immediately rushed to the girl to give him first aid, but I joined in without any
hesitation. Luckily she was not bad injured and we sent her to the near hospital.
I am proud of what I did for the girl. As member of the society, I am aware of that being
responsible is what it takes to make a better community.
参考答案
I can well remember an incident that happened on a rain Sunday afternoon. I was waiting for
rainy
the green lights that a girl of about ten was knocked down by a pass car. The car then drives off
when passing drove
quickly. A man immediately rushed to the girl to give him first aid, but I joined in without any
her and
hesitation. Luckily she was not bad injured and we sent her to the near hospital.
badly nearest (nearby)
I am proud of what I did for the girl. As member of the society, I am aware of that being
a
responsible is what it takes to make a better society.
[六]
Exercise can have a surprised number of benefits. It is important way to keep fit. Not only
can it help you achieve beneficial weight loss,and every time you exercise,it helps to reduce the
risk of disease more efficiently. By exercising regular,you look better and feel more confident,
which have a positive effect on both physical and mental wellbeing. While you exercise ,
especially in some challenging sports,you often work as a member of a team. In this way,it also
teaches us how to work with others.
A healthy,fit brain means you can answer questions more quickly,think more clearly and
developed a better memory. Have a healthy brain is useful for no matter what point you are at in
your life. For these reasons,we students should take exercises.
参考答案
Exercise can have a surprised
surprising number of benefits. It is
∧
an important way to keep fit.
Not only can it help you achieve beneficial weight loss,and
but every time you exercise,it helps to
reduce the risk of disease more efficiently.By exercising regular
regularly,you look better and feel more
∧
confident , which have
has a positive effect on both physical and mental wellbeing. While you
exercise,especially in some challenging sports,you often work as a member of a team. In this way,
it also teaches us
you how to work with others.
A healthy,fit brain means you can answer questions more quickly,think more clearly and
developed
develop a better memory. Have
Having a healthy brain is useful for no matter what point you are at
in your life. For these reasons,we students should take exercises
exercise .
27.答案 surprised→surprising
解析 考查形容词。句意为:运动有着令人惊讶的益处,修饰物故 surprised 改为 surprising。
28.答案 important 前加 an
解析 考查冠词。an important way 一个重要的方式,故 important 前加 an。
29.答案 and→but
解析 考查固定短语。此处为固定短语 not only...but (also)...,故 and 改为 but。
30.答案 regular→regularly
解析 考查副词。此处应用副词修饰现在分词 exercising,故 regular 改为 regularly。
31.答案 have→has
解析 考查主谓一致。which 引导的非限制性定语从句,当先行词为一个句子的时候,谓语
动词用单数。故 have 改为 has。
32.答案 us→you
解析 考查代词。上文主要使用的是第二人称,故 us 改为 you。
33.答案 developed→develop
解析 考查一般现在时。本文主要使用了一般现在时,故 developed 改为 develop。
34.答案 Have→Having
解析 考查动名词。此处为动名词作主语。故 Have 改为 Having。
35.答案 删除 for
解析 句意为:有一个健康的大脑很有用,此处 for 多余。故删除 for。
36.答案 exercises→exercise
解析 考查名词单复数。exercise 指锻炼时,为不可数名词。故 exercises 改为 exercise。
[七]
Many art lovers consider the Frick Collection the better art gallery in New York. Henry Clay
Frick,rich New Yorker,died in 1919,leaving his house,furnitures and art collection to the
American people. At this gallery,you would see an excellent collection of pretwentieth century
Western paintings. We will also be able to explore Frick’s beautiful house. The house is well
worth visit. Besides,Guggenheim Museum owned 5,000 modern paintings,sculptures or drawings.
Not all art works is displayed at the same time.The best way to see the paintings is to start from
the top floor and walk down to the bottom of.
参考答案
Many art lovers consider the Frick Collection the better
best art gallery in New York. Henry
Clay Frick , ∧
a rich New Yorker , died in 1919 , leaving his house , furnitures
furniture and art
collection to the American people. At this gallery , you would
will see an excellent collection of
pretwentieth century Western paintings. We
You will also be able to explore Frick’s beautiful
house. The house is well worth
∧
a 或 visit
visiting.Besides,Guggenheim Museum owned
owns 5,000
modern paintings,sculptures or
and drawings. Not all art works is
are displayed at the same time.
The best way to see the paintings is to start from the top floor and walk down to the bottom of.
[八]
HIV is a virus that weaken a person’s immune system. You can have a HIV in your blood
for a long time. However,eventual it will damage your immune system so much as your body can
no longer fight disease. This stage of the illness was called AIDS. So far,almost everyone who
has developed AIDS died. HIV is spread through blood or the fluid where carries the virus. The
virus gets inside the body through breaking skin,or by injection. Certainly,scientists will find a
cure to HIV/AIDS one day. But before that happens,you need to protect myself.
参考答案
HIV is a virus that weaken
weakens a person’s immune system. You can have a HIV in your
blood for a long time. However, eventual
eventually it will damage your immune system so much as
that
your body can no longer fight disease. This stage of the illness was
is called AIDS. So far,almost
everyone who has developed AIDS
∧
has died. HIV is spread through blood or the fluid
where
that/which carries the virus. The virus gets inside the body through breaking
broken skin,or by injection.
Certainly,scientists will find a cure to
for HIV/AIDS one day. But before that happens,you need to
protect myself
yourself.
[九]
The following is a poem writing by Rod McKuen. I’ve saved the summer and I gave it all
to you to hold on winter mornings when the snow is new. I’ve saved some sunlights if you
should ever need a place away from darkness where your mind can feed there. And for yourself
I’ve kept your smile when you were but nineteen. Till you are older you will not know what
bravely young smiles can mean. I know no answers to help you at your way. The answers lie
somewhere at bottom of the day. But if you have a need for love,I will give you all which I own.
It might help you down the road after you have found your own.
参考答案
The following is a poem writing
written by Rod McKuen. I’ve saved the summer and I gave
give it all
to you to hold on winter mornings when the snow is new. I’ve saved some sunlights
sunlight if you
should ever need a place away from darkness where your mind can feed there .And for yourself
myself
I’ve kept your smile when you were but nineteen. Till you are older you will not know what
bravely
brave young smiles can mean. I know no answers to help you at
on your way. The answers lie
somewhere at
∧
the bottom of the day. But if you have a need for love,I will give you all which
或 which
that I own.It might help you down the road after
till/until you have found your own.
[十]
Stress is a state of being upset that happen when we are under pressure. We students have all
experienced stress over problems in our daily life,test results,or too many homework. Since stress
can make us sick,we have to learn what to deal with it. When you are stressful,don’t forget your
hobbies. If you are fond music,just turn on the radio. Generally,people think TV may interfere
with their children’s studies. However,if you worry about that your English and don’t know what to
do ,you can get help from English TV programs. It is also help to share your worries to your
friends. They will surely give you some advices and help you out of trouble. As long as we treat
stress proper,we can relax ourselves and keep away from its bad effects.
参考答案
Stress is a state of being upset that happen
happens when we are under pressure. We students have
all experienced stress over problems in our daily life,test results,or too many
much homework. Since
stress can make us sick,we have to learn what
how to deal with it. When you are stressful
stressed,don’t
forget your hobbies. If you are fond
∧
of music,just turn on the radio. Generally,people think
TV may interfere with their children’s studies. However,if you worry about that your English
and don’t know what to do,you can get help from English TV programs. It is also help
helpful to
share your worries to
with your friends. They will surely give you some advices
advice and help you out
of trouble. As long as we treat stress proper
properly,we can relax ourselves and keep away from its bad
effects.
28.答案 happen→happens
解析 a state 是先行词,后面定语从句的谓语动词用单数形式,故把 happen 改为 happens。
29.答案 many→much
解析 homework 是不可数名词,故把 many 改为 much。
30.答案 what→how
解析 固定搭配:what to do with sth./how to deal with sth.怎样处理某事,故把 what 改为
how。
31.答案 stressful→stressed
解析 句意为:当你感到有压力的时候。故把 stressful 改为 stressed。
32.答案 fond 后加 of
解析 固定搭配:be fond of 喜爱……,故在 fond 后加 of。
33.答案 删除 that
解析 worry about 后面直接跟宾语,故删除 that。
34.答案 help→helpful
解析 be 动词后面用形容词作表语,故把 help 改为 helpful。
35.答案 to→with
解析 固定搭配:share sth.with sb.与某人分享某物。故把 to 改为 with。
36.答案 advices→advice
解析 advice 是不可数名词,故把 advices 改为 advice。
37.答案 proper→properly
解析 用副词修饰动词 treat,故把 proper 改为 properly。
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