【英语】2019届二轮复习书面表达申请信(二)写作指导例析（3页word版） 3页

‎2019届二轮复习书面表达申请信(二)写作指导例析 你校的外教Chris Pearson开设了一个英语辅导班(English Tutorial)，可根据学生的实际需要进行辅导。报名者须根据个人实际情况提出申请并选择辅导内容。假如你是李明，请你给外教写一封电子邮件申请加入辅导班。内容主要包括：‎ ‎1．介绍个人情况；‎ ‎2．说明辅导意向(如口语、语法、写作、文化知识等其中的一项或几项)；‎ ‎3．表达愿望。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。‎ Dear Mr. Pearson，‎ I am writing to apply for the membership of the English Tutorial.　‎ ‎　 ‎ ‎　 ‎ Looking forward to your reply. ‎ Yours sincerely，‎ Li Ming ‎[四步写作]‎ 一、定人称、定时态，审题快而不偏 人称以第一人称为主，主要时态用一般现在时 二、列提纲、准写词，要点全而不漏 ‎1．介绍个人情况 ‎①擅长 be_good_at ‎②申请 apply_for ‎2．说明英语学习中的困难 在……方面有困难 have_difficulty_in_...‎ ‎3．要参加的辅导项目 ‎①英语口语 oral_English ‎②语法 grammar ‎4．参加辅导的愿望 ‎①如果……我将不胜感激 I_would_appreciate_it_if_...‎ ‎②申请 application 三、由词汇、组成句，表达亮而不俗 ‎1．我认为这是一个提高我的英语技能的好机会。‎ I think it is a good chance for me to improve my English skills.‎ ‎2．虽然已经学习英语近六年了，我仍然没掌握好。‎ Though I have been learning English for nearly six years, I’m still not good at it.‎ ‎3．我觉得语法很困难，以至于我必须花很多时间在上面。‎ I find the grammar is so difficult that I must spend much time on it.‎ ‎4．我们的老师只强调英语知识的教学。因此，我们没有机会练习英语口语。‎ Our teacher only emphasizes the teaching of English knowledge.As a result, we have no chance to practise oral English.‎ ‎5．我确信，在你的帮助下，我的语法和口语可以大大提高。‎ I’m convinced that my grammar and oral English could be greatly improved with your help.‎ 四、衔接词、巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用firstly, in addition, therefore等衔接词串句成文 Dear Mr.Pearson，‎ I am writing to apply for the membership of the English Tutorial. I think it is a good chance for me to improve my English skills.‎ Firstly, I’d like to tell you my present situation. Though I have been learning English for nearly six years, I’m still not good at it. I find the grammar is so difficult that I must spend much time on it. In addition, to ensure students can get good marks in exams, our teacher only emphasizes the teaching of English knowledge. As a result, we have no chance to practise oral English. From time to time, I can’t get my ideas across to others. Therefore, I hope I can be a member of the English Tutorial. I’m convinced that my grammar and oral English could be greatly improved with your help.‎ Looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours sincerely，‎ Li Ming ‎ ‎[写改两用]‎ 这是根据本题目学生完成的一篇习作，文中有10处错误，请改正。‎ Dear Mr.Pearson, ‎ I am writing to apply for the membership of the English Tutorial. As an Senior 3 student, I’m not doing very well in English but I always get poor marks in the exam. Although my spoken English is very good, and I can even communicate to the foreigners, but my written English and grammar are very bad. Besides, I can’t write the English composition good, that is what troubles me most. Could you offer me guide on English learning, especially written English and grammars in the English Tutorial?‎ I would appreciate if you could consider mine application. ‎ Looking forward to your reply.‎ Yours sincerely，‎ Li Ming 答案：第二句：an→a; but→and 第三句：to→with；去掉but 第四句：good→well; that→which 第五句：guide→guidance; grammars→grammar 第六句：appreciate后加it; mine→my