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届二轮复习如何写好书面表达
A great writing consists of good sentences. To write an good essay, you should
write good sentences first
!
How
to write good sentences
?
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提升英语写作的
“
三板斧
”
从“素颜”到“惊艳”
我爱你
。
外形俊朗的
我爱你
。
一个风流倜傥、
外形俊朗的
我爱你
。
4.
一个风流倜傥、外形俊朗的
我
深深地
爱你
。
5.
一个风流倜傥、外形俊朗的
我
深深地
爱
那个令李易峰一夜变憔悴的
你
。
6.
一个风流倜傥、外形俊朗的
我
深深地
爱
那个令李易峰一夜变憔悴、
江爷爷眼镜片崩碎的
你。
7.
在一个让人难忘的夜晚,一个风流倜傥、外形俊朗的
我
深深地
爱
那个令李易峰一夜变憔悴、江爷爷眼镜片崩碎的
你
—
罗玉凤
。
国民
”
女神
”—
罗玉凤
从“素颜”到“惊艳”
我爱你
。
外形俊朗的
我爱你
。
一个风流倜傥、
外形俊朗的
我爱你
。
4.
一个风流倜傥、外形俊朗的
我
深深地
爱你
。
5.
一个风流倜傥、外形俊朗的
我
深深地
爱
那个令李易峰一夜变憔悴的
你
。
6.
一个风流倜傥、外形俊朗的
我
深深地
爱
那个令李易峰一夜变憔悴、
江爷爷眼镜片崩碎的
你。
7.
在一个让人难忘的夜晚,一个风流倜傥、外形俊朗的
我
深深地
爱
那个令李易峰一夜变憔悴、江爷爷眼镜片崩碎的
你
—
罗玉凤
。
从“素颜”到“惊艳”
在一个让人难忘的夜晚,一个风流倜傥、外形俊朗
我
深深地
爱
那个令李易峰一夜变憔悴、江爷爷眼镜
崩碎的
你
—
罗玉凤。
在一个让人难忘的夜晚
我
(
who
一个风流倜傥、外形俊朗)
爱
(
深深地
)
你
(
who
那个令李易峰一夜变憔悴、江爷爷眼镜片崩碎
)
—
罗玉凤
。
提升英语写作的“三板斧”
--
从“素颜”到“惊艳”
Strategy 1: Adding words (
加单词
)
Strategy 2: Adding
phrases(
加
短语
)
Strategy 3: Adding
clauses(
加
从句
)
提升英语写作的“三板斧”
Strategy 1: Adding words
Girls eat apples.
1.
School
girls eat apples.
(noun
名词
)
2.
Beautiful
girls eat apples.
(adjective
形容词
)
3.Girls eat apples
happily
.
(adverb
副词
)
4.Girls eat
10
apples.
(number
数词
)
5.
The
girls eat apples.
(article
冠词
)
6.
Our
girls eat apples.
(pronoun
代词
)
7.Girls eat
up
apples.
(preposition
介词)
8.
Wow!
Girls eat apples.
(interjection
感叹词)
9.Girls walk
and
eat apples.
(conjunction
连词)
Warning
注意!!
In theory, 10 types of words can be added to expand the sentence, but practically, some types of them make more sense than others.
Warning
注意!!
C
hoose the most proper words.
提升英语写作的“三板斧”
Strategy 1: Adding words
1.
(noun
名词
)
2.
(adjective
形容词
)
3.
(adverb
副词
)
4.
(number
数词
)
5.
(article
冠词
)
Boys play basketball.
6.
(pronoun
代词
)
7.
(preposition
介词)
8.
(interjection
感叹词)
9.
(conjunction
连词)
提升英语写作的“三板斧”
Strategy 2: Adding phrases
Girls eat apples.
1.
In the morning,
girls eat apples.
(
介词短语
, in/on/at/after
等
)
2.Girls
standing there
eat apples.
(
现在分词分词短语
)
3.Girls eat apples
given to them by their teacher
.
(
过去分词短语
)
4.Girls eat apples
to keep healthy
.
(
不定式短语
)
Warning
注意!!
In theory, 4 types of phrases can be added to expand the sentence, but practically, some types of them make more sense than others.
Warning
注意!!
C
hoose the most proper phrases.
提升英语写作的“三板斧”
Strategy 2: Adding phrases
1.
(
介词短语
, in/on/at/after
等
)
2.
(
现在分词分词短语
)
3.
(
过去分词短语
)
4.
(
不定式短语
)
Boys play basketball.
In the evening/on Friday afternoon/ at school/after class
, boys play basketball.
Boys
wearing their favorite shoes
, play basketball.
Boys play basketball
bought from their teacher
.
Boys play basketball
to have fun.
提升英语写作的“三板斧”
Strategy 3: Adding clauses
Girls eat apples.
1.Girls
who are from SSFLS
eat apples.
2.Girls eat apples
which are big and fresh
.
(attributive clause
定语从句
)
Boys play basketball
.
提升英语写作的“三板斧”
Strategy 3: Adding clauses
Girls eat apples.
1.
When the class is over
, girls eat apples.(
时间状语
)
2.Girls eat apples
wherever they go
.(
地点状语
)
3.Girls eat apples
because they are good for their health
.(
原因状语
)
4
. In order to keep good health
, girls eat apples.(
目的状语
)
5.
If there is nothing left at home,
girls eat apples.(
条件状语
)
提升英语写作的“三板斧”
Strategy 3: Adding clauses
Girls eat apples.
6.
Although the dinner is delicious
, girls eat apples.(
让步状语
)
7.Girls eat apples
as if they were out of prison
.(
方式状语
)
8.Girls eat
so many
apples
that they are all stuffed
.(
结果状语
)
9
.
Girls eat
as many
apples
as boys do
.(
比较状语
)
Warning
注意!!
In theory, 2 types of clauses(adverbial clause has 9 types) can be added to expand the sentence, but practically, some types of them make more sense than others.
Warning
注意!!
C
hoose the most proper clauses.
提升英语写作的“三板斧”
Strategy 3: Adding clauses
1.
时间状语
when/while/after
等
2.
地点状语
wherever
等
3.
原因状语
because/as/since
等
4.
让步状语
although/though/even though
等
5.
条件状语
if
等
6.
目的状语
so, in order to
等
7.
结果状语
so…that/ with the result that
等
8.
比较状语
as…as/ the same as…
等
9.
方式状语
as if
等
Boys play basketball
.
提升英语写作的“三板斧”
--
从“素颜”到“惊艳”
Strategy 1: Adding words
Strategy 2: Adding phrases
Strategy 3: Adding clauses
Improve the sentence
T.F Boys come to SSFLS.(T.F Boys
来二外
)
Improve the sentence
Dakang LI drives a car.(
李达康开车
)
Improve the sentence
Barry Allen drinks coffee.
(
”
闪电侠
”
喝咖啡)