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第四
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美句输入
完美文章
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佳句输出
层级十二
句顺意畅的“过渡语”
美句输入
美句输入
表示
起始关系的过渡性
词语
above all
，
to begin/start with
，
today
，
now
，
nowadays
，
at present
，
currently
，
recently
，
generally speaking
，
according to
，
with the development of...
等。
1
To start with
，
I have been learning and speaking Mandarin for about 17 years.
首先，我学说普通话已经
17
年了。
(2015·
四川卷
·
满分作文
)
美句输入
表示
时间顺序的过渡性
词语
firstly
，
first of all
，
to begin/start with
，
then
，
later
，
in the end
，
finally
，
at last
，
after that
，
afterwards
，
since then
，
immediately
，
suddenly
，
meanwhile
等。
2
Firstly
，
I have always been interested in reading books
.
Secondly
，
I'd like to share my books with others as well.(2015·
重庆卷
·
满分作文
)
首先，我一直对读书感兴趣；其次，我也喜欢与别人分享我的书籍。
美句输入
表示
并列关系的过渡性
词语
and
，
or
，
also
，
as well as
，
neither...nor...
，
not only...but also...
，
either...or...
，
not...but...
等。
3
She finally earned respect of them
，
who eventually became confident
as well as
wellbehaved
. (
2015·
广东卷
·
满分作文
)
她最后赢得了他们的尊重，他们最终变得自信，表现也不错。
美句输入
表示
转折关系的过渡性
词语
but
，
yet
，
however
，
while
，
otherwise
，
on the contrary
，
though
，
although
，
even if/though
，
despite
，
in spite of
，
regardless of
等。
4
Some compromises were unavoidable
，
but
the video turned out perfect.
有些妥协是不可避免的，但视频结果是完美的。
(2017·
北京卷
·
书面表达
)
美句输入
表示
因果关系的过渡性词语
because
，
as
，
since
，
for
，
thanks to
，
due to
，
as a result of
，
so
，
therefore
，
as a result/consequence
等。
5
Thanks to
the assistance of the local media
，
he has found 32 time twins across 13 countries
，
with 17 males and 15 females
. (
广东卷
·
满分作文
)
多亏当地媒体的协助，他在
13
个国家找到了
32
对同年同月同日出生的人，其中
17
对男性，
15
对女性。
美句输入
表示递进关系的过渡性
词语
what's more
，
furthermore
，
moreover
，
besides
，
what's worse
，
still less
，
to make matters worse
，
worse still
，
on (the) one hand...on the other hand...
，
for one thing...for another (thing
)
等
。
6
What's worse
，
I don't communicate a lot with my parents and my friends.
更糟糕的是，我不经常和父母和朋友交流。
(2017·
天津卷
·
书面表达
)
美句输入
表示列举事实的过渡性
词语
such as
，
for example/instance
，
take...for example
，
that is to say
，
as follows
，
in other words
等。
7
The plan for the day is
as follows
：
Firstly
，
it's a custom to have dumplings on that day
，
so we'll make delicious dumplings with our own hands rather than buy some for them
. (
2015·
全国卷
Ⅱ·
满分作文
)
这天的计划如下：首先，在那天吃饺子是一项风俗，因此我们会亲手为他们做美味的饺子而不是去买。
美句输入
表示观点的过渡性
词语
in my opinion
，
in my view
，
from my point of view
，
as far as I am concerned
，
as for me
，
personally
等。
8
As far as I'm concerned
，
all our classmates have learned a lot from our communication and the various activities.(2016·
天津卷
·
书面表达
)
就我个人而言，我的所有同学从交流和各种各样的活动中学到很多东西。
美句输入
表示总结的过渡性
词语
in short
，
in brief
，
in conclusion
，
in a/one word
，
to sum up
，
all in all
，
on the whole
，
in general
，
actually
等。
9
In short
，
playing basketball enriches my life and makes me more confident.
总之，打篮球丰富我的生活，使我更加自信。
用过渡词汇补全句子
1
．
_______________________________
(
首先
)
，
the most significant thing is to set a goal
，
work out a plan and carry out your plan step by step.
2
．
______________________________________
(
况且
)
，
listening to some soft music does relax your mood and give you a new start.
3
．
I lost my way in the forest and
__________________________________
(
更糟的是
)
，
it became dark.
4
．
______________
(
因此
)
，
I suggest we be given more time for sports and sleep
.
5
．
_________________________________________
(
总之
)
，
we should take effective measures to protect our environment.
First of all/To begin with
Besides/In addition/What's more/Moreover
to make matters worse/worse still
Therefore
In a word/In conclusion/In short/In brief
补全句子
6
．
________________
(
否则
) we'll have to answer for our selfishness sooner or later.
7
．
Swimming
______________
(
不但
) benefits our health
，
______________
(
而且
) helps us have a strong will.
8
．
_____________________
(
正相反
)
，
smart phones not only take up our valuable time
，
but also do great harm to our health.
9
．
_____________________________
(
在我看来
)
，
only by studying hard at ordinary time can you succeed eventually.
10
．
______________
(
因此
)
，
I suggest we get up early to catch the bus.
Otherwise
not only
but also
On the contrary
As far as I am concerned
Therefore
补全句子
11
．
______________ (
事实上
), we can't succeed in everything we try
. What's
important is that we should stick at it.
12
．
In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise,
______________ (
例如
) swimming, running and various ball games.
13
．
I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked
. ______________ (
所以
) my classmates and I had a discussion and wrote a report.
14
．
___________________ (
除了
·
·····
之外
) reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration.
15
．
______________ (
最后
), we should take part in sports and outdoors activities frequently
. They
really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.
Actually
such as
So
In addition to
Finally
选用适当的过渡性词语补全短文（观点对比类）
Dear editor
，
I'm
writing to tell you something about the discussion on whether it is necessary for senior one students to take the one
week
military training
. Views
vary from person to person.
Some
hold that it is necessary
. 1.
______________
，
it can improve students' teamwork spirit
，
which will play an important part in their life and study
.
2. _____________________
，
there is no doubt that they become stronger physically and mentally through the training
.
3
．
___________
，
others
have opposite views
. They
think it is a waste of time
. 4
．
______________________
，
students get burnt easily without any protection in the sun.
5
．
__________________________________
，
though we may feel tired during the training
，
it goes without saying that the
one
week military training is meaningful.
Yours
，
Li Hua
On one hand
however
，
besides
，
meanwhile
，
personally
，
additionally
，
on one hand
，
on the other hand
，
as far as I'm concerned
On the other hand
However
Besides / Additionally
Personally/As far as I'm concerned