【英语】2019届二轮复习书面表达倡议书写作指导例析（3页word版） 3页

‎2019届二轮复习书面表达倡议书写作指导例析 假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华。针对目前一些地方血库纷纷告急这一情况，请参照以下提示，用英文写一份倡议书，提倡无偿献血。‎ ‎1．社会上对献血的错误认识；‎ ‎2．指出献血的意义；‎ ‎3．开展相关活动。‎ 注意：1.词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；‎ ‎3．开头与结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。‎ Boys and girls，‎ Recently some blood banks across the country are reported to be short of blood supplies.　‎ ‎　 ‎ ‎　 ‎ ‎　 ‎ ‎　 ‎ Students’ Union ‎[四步写作]‎ 一、定人称、定时态，审题快而不偏 人称以第一人称为主，主要时态用一般现在时 二、列提纲、准写词，要点全而不漏 ‎1．社会上对献血的错误认识 ‎①导致疾病 cause_some_illnesses ‎②坚持 insist_on ‎2．指出献血的意义 ‎①救命 save_one_life ‎②献血 donate_blood ‎3．开展相关活动 ‎①开展活动 carry_out_activities ‎②使某人意识到 make_sb._aware_of 三、由词汇、组成句，表达亮而不俗 ‎1．人们对献血的看法因人而异。‎ People’s opinions about donating blood vary from person to person.‎ ‎2．有些人认为这不是一件好事。他们持有这个观点是因为它可能会导致一些疾病。‎ Some people think it is not a good thing. They hold this opinion because it may cause some illnesses.‎ ‎3．其他人坚持献血，因为它可以挽救别人的生命。‎ Others insist on donating blood, because it could save others’ life.‎ ‎4．就我而言，我赞成后者的观点。‎ As to me, I am in favor of the latter idea.‎ ‎5．当有人可能因失血快要丧命时，如果你及时献血你就会挽救一个生命。‎ When somebody may lack blood and almost lose his or her life, you will save one life if you donate blood in time.‎ ‎6．应该开展一些活动让人们意识到献血的重要性。‎ Some activities should be carried out to make people aware of the importance of donating blood.‎ 四、衔接词、巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用however, first, second, so等衔接词串句成文 Boys and girls，‎ Recently some blood banks across the country are reported to be short of blood supplies. People’s opinions about donating blood vary from person to person. Some people think it is not a good thing. They hold this opinion because it may cause some illnesses. However, others insist on donating blood, because it could save others’ life.‎ As to me, I am in favor of the latter idea. The following are the reasons for my choice. First, when somebody may lack blood and almost lose his or her life, you will save one life if you donate blood in time. Second, we are all in the same family, and we should help each other.‎ So some activities should be carried out to make people aware of the importance of donating blood.‎ Students’ Union ‎[写改两用]‎ 这是根据本题目学生完成的一篇习作，文中有10处错误，请改正。‎ Boys and girls，‎ Recently some blood banks across the country are reported to be short of blood supplies. Some people hold the wrong idea that donate blood does harm to the donators’ health, but we shouldn’t donate our blood to others.‎ But the truth is when a small amount of blood is taken out, the body will make an quick adjustment to work normally.Blood is important to patients, and without which much of them can’t survive. And to the youth in the new age, not only is donating blood for free a society responsibility, but also it show the spirit of cooperation and sharing.‎ We senior high school students should set a good example for other people. From now on, our school will hold a series of activity to tell people the benefits of donating blood.‎ Students’ Union 答案：第二句：donate→donating; but→so 第三句：第一个is后加that; an→a 第四句：去掉and或which→it; much→many 第五句：society→social; show→shows 第六句：for→to 第七句：activity→activities