【英语】2019届二轮复习书面表达建议信（二）写作指导例析（3页word版） 3页

‎2019届二轮复习书面表达建议信写作指导例析 假设你是李华，你班最近举行了一次班会，讨论怎样使英语学习变成一件快乐的事。请你根据下面所提示的信息，为某英语网站写一封建议信，谈谈你们的讨论情况并提出你的建议。‎ 讨论情况：1.课内互动；‎ ‎2．课外活动；‎ ‎3．运用英语。‎ 注意：1.对所给要点逐一陈述，不要简单翻译；‎ ‎2．词数100左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。‎ 参考词汇：互动的interactive Dear sir，‎ Recently, we had a discussion on how to make learning English relaxing and fun.　‎ ‎　 ‎ ‎　 ‎ ‎　 ‎ ‎　 ‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua ‎[四步写作]‎ 一、定人称、定时态，审题快而不偏 人称以第一人称为主，主要时态用一般现在时 二、列提纲、准写词，要点全而不漏 ‎1．同学们提出了很多建议 提出建议 put_forward_suggestions ‎2．课内互动：课堂讨论、讲故事、英语对话等 互动活动 interactive_activities ‎3．课外活动：寻找各种机会用英语交流 ‎①寻找尽可能多的机会 find_as_many_chances_as_possible ‎②练习 practise ‎4．运用英语：听英语歌曲、看英语电视节目、交英语笔友等 ‎①听英语歌曲 listen_to_English_songs ‎②看英语电视节目 watch_English_TV_programs ‎③交英语笔友 make_English_pen_friends 三、由词汇、组成句，表达亮而不俗 ‎1．他们中的一些人建议我们在课堂上要有更多的互动活动，这将为我们提供使用英语的机会。‎ Some of them suggest that we (should) have more interactive activities in class, which will provide a chance for us to use English.‎ ‎2．我们可以组织英语演讲比赛或晚会，这些都是学习英语的有趣的方式。‎ We can organize English speech contests or English evenings, which are all fun ways to learn English.‎ ‎3．在我看来，我们可以听英语歌曲、看英语电视节目。‎ In my opinion, we can listen to English songs and watch English TV programs.‎ ‎4．浏览英语网站是一个好主意，这给我们提供了一个有趣的英语世界。‎ It’s a good idea to surf English websites, which offer us a fun world of English.‎ 四、衔接词、巧串联，佳作顺而不乱 用适当的衔接词串句成文 Dear sir，‎ Recently, we had a discussion on how to make learning English relaxing and fun. The students have put forward many suggestions about this. Some of them suggest that we (should) have more interactive activities in class, which will provide a chance for us to use English.After class, it’s up to us to find as many chances as possible to practise it. We can even organize English speech contests or English evenings, which are all fun ways to learn English.‎ There is no limit to the ways we can come up with to make it a fun thing to learn English. In my opinion, we can listen to English songs, watch English TV programs or make English pen friends on the Internet. It’s also a good idea to surf English websites, which offer us a fun world of English.‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua ‎[写改两用]‎ 这是根据本题目学生完成的一篇习作，文中有10处错误，请改正。‎ Dear sir，‎ Recently, we had a discussion on how to make learning English relaxing and fun. It’s natural if we have come up with many suggestion concerning the topic. First of all, we can have more interactive activities in class, that are helpful in making English learning great fun. Secondly, we need to find more chances communicate with people in English, whether they are English teachers or classmates, because using English is a best way to learn.‎ These ideas sounds reasonable and practical. From my experience, there are many other interested and relaxing ways. For example, we can listened to English songs and watch English movies. We can also watch English programs, join in English clubs or make English pen friends on the Internet.‎ All in all, how we need is more free time and more space.‎ Yours，‎ Li Hua 答案：第二句：if→that; suggestion→suggestions 第三句：that→which 第四句：chances后加to; a→the 第五句：sounds→sound 第六句：interested→interesting 第七句：listened→listen 第八句：去掉in 第九句：how→what