2019届二轮复习书面表达专题记叙文写作（一）课件（13张） 13页

路漫漫其修远兮 吾将上下而求索 2019 届二轮复习书面表达专题 　记叙文 第三部分 技 巧 点 拨 习 作 点 评 露 一 小 手 2 3 1 技 巧 点 拨 Ⅰ . 写作要点 记叙文是以叙述为基本方法来记人、叙事，构思记叙文时，应该考虑到以下几个方面： (1) 场景 记叙文往往一开始就提供事情发生的背景，交代时间、地点和人物。 (2) 结构 记叙文的叙述方式有顺叙、倒叙和插叙。 (3) 人称 记叙文可用第一人称叙述，也可用第三人称叙述。 (4) 时态 记叙文通常是记叙过去发生的事情，故常用过去时态。 Ⅱ . 常用模板 / 句式 A ．结构模板 ________ 时间 ________is memorable because________ 人物 ________had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we________ 活动一 ________. Upon arrival, we began to________ 活动二 ________. Some were________ 活动三 ________. Others were________ 活动四 ________. After getting the work done, we________ 活动五 ________. Seeing________ 活动六 ________ ， we________ 感受 ________. We feel it's our duty to________ 动作 ________ ． B ．常用句式 1. I was about to do....when... 2. Tired as we were, we still felt quite happy. 3. It was snowing/raining heavily on Monday morning. 4. Last night I was busy preparing for my test when I heard a loud noise. 5. It's reported that Sanlu milk powder has caused kidney stones in babies. 习 作 点 评 你校上周举办了 “ 英语周 ” 活动。请你根据下列提示写一篇英语短文，介绍 “ 英语周 ” 活动期间的情况并谈谈你的感受。 活动时间： 3 月 15 日～ 3 月 21 日 活动对象：全体同学、英语教师以及两位英语外教 活动内容： …… 活动效果： …… 注意： 1. 词数 120 ～ 150 ； 2 ．可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，语句通顺。 Last week our school began an “ English week ” ． 【 举行活动要用 hold ，所以此处应该改为 held 。 】It started on Mar. 15 and ended on Mar. 21. All the students and English teachers, included two foreign teachers from America took _ part in it. 【 “ 包括 …… 在内 ” ，应该使用介词 including ＋宾语； “ 参加 ……” 最好使用高级词语 “ participate ” ，所以改为 participated 。 】 During that week, we sang quite a few English songs and joined in English speaking contests de v eloping our interest in English. 【 此处应该为动词不定式作目的状语。所以改为 to develop 。 】 In addition, we put on short English plays and watched English films, w hich we learned a lot. 【 表示 “ 从 …… 中学到 ” ，此处应该使用 from which 。 】Besides, we had a wonderful time guessing English riddles. As _ e v eryone _ kno w s _ that practice makes perfect. 【as 引导非限制性定语从句，不是主语从句的形式主语，可改为 It is known that 或 As everyone knows ， 】As a result of this activity, we broadened our horizon, became more interested in English and our speaking ability has greatly improved. I think it's a effective way to learn English, so I enjoyed it very much.【 此处应该使用 an ，后面是元音音素开头的单词。 】In the future, I will spare no efforts to participate in such kind of activities if possible.