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2018届二轮复习 短文改错原创试题10篇训练之一
【一】
I like to play basketballs very much,so when I went to a middle school,I joined the basketball team.Last week,our team had a match.We were against other school.All of us were so exciting and wanted to win.When the match began,our team works very slowly.We could not cooperate very good,because this was the first time of us to play.When half match time went,we lagged behind.Our team leader called us together and told us we must get united,so that we could have the chance win.Then we played hardly and cooperated so well.But we won the game in the end.
答案:
I like to play very much,so when I went to middle school,I joined the basketball team.Last week,our team had a match.We were against school.All of us were so and wanted to win.When the match began,our team very slowly.We could not cooperate very ,because this was the first time us to play.When half match time went,we lagged behind.Our team leader called us together and told us we must get united,so that we could have the chance win.Then we played
and cooperated so well. we won the game in the end.
【二】
I am grateful to my English teacher Susan, at whose help I couldn’t have won first prize in the English Talent Competition for high school student last week.
I used to be poorly in spoken English. I was too shy to speak in class. Since she teaches us last term, she has been encouraging him to overcome fear and speak out in class. Thanks to her, I have made great progresses. Besides, I practiced several times in the front of her. It was her advice which made me a better speaker and full of confidence. And I owe my success to her.
Susan set me a good example. I am determined to become an English teacher when I grow up.
答案:第一句:at→without; student→students
第二句:poorly→poor
第四句:teaches→taught; him→me
第五句:progresses→progress
第六句:去掉the
第七句:which→that
第八句:And→So
第九句:Susan后加has
【三】
I can still remember I was once asked to make speech before the whole class at the age of 9. You can imagine how shy I was when I thought of that with so many eyes fixed to me. I had no more choice but to prepare for it, though. The hardest part was my oral presentation from my memory, for reading from the paper wasn’t allowing. The real moment began before I stood on the platform with my legs trembling or my mind blank. But my listeners were waiting patient. Gradually, I found me back, giving my speech at last. After what
seemed to be a long time, I heard all the listeners applauding loudly. Ever since then, my fear of speak before the audience had disappeared. Actually, now I’ve become a great speaker!
答案:第一句:make后加a
第二句:to→on/upon
第三句:去掉more
第四句:allowing→allowed
第五句:before→when/as/after; or→and
第六句:patient→patiently
第七句:me→myself
第九句:speak→speaking; had→has
【四】
Last month, I was told we would have our first military training. At first, I thought it will be hard to spend a whole week stayed away from school and home. The sunshine would be very strongly during these days, or we could easily get sunburnt. Later, when I was in the camp, I found it was a lot fun. The training was hard for you all. But my classmates and I were treated very kindly by all the soldier. The food in the camp look simple, but tasted good. Now you never know how happy days we had in the camp. I think the experience has been made us stronger!
答案:第二句:will→would; stayed→staying
第三句:strongly→strong; or→and/so
第四句:lot后加of
第五句:you→us
第六句:soldier→soldiers
第七句:look→looked
第八句:how→what
第九句:去掉been
【五】
Life is an mystery and we will never know that what is waiting for us. But one thing is for sure: problems are unavoidable. For us, it’s the process of solving problems that help us grow.
Make a speech used to be a big problem for me. With a strong accent and terribly pronunciation, I failed in speech competition many times, but I didn’t hold back. In the contrary, I considered it a good chance for me to improve myself. I recorded my speech, listening to it and corrected my pronunciation. Now I’m confident enough to give my best speech to you all.
My dear friends, don’t afraid of problems, but take advantage of it to be the best of ourselves!
答案:第一句:an→a; 去掉that
第三句:help→helps
第四句:Make→Making
第五句:terribly→terrible; competition→competitions
第六句:In→On
第七句:listening→listened
第九句:don’t后加be; it→them
【六】
Sunny 31st, July
It was sunny today and I was in a good mood. Tired of studying and the noise of city life, I come to the ecology park to enjoy scenery and get relaxing in the afternoon.
While I arrived at the park, what came into its sight were the thick green trees. The air was fresh. In addition, I could clear see a path around the pond. Lying on the grasses decorated with various flowers, I felt with ease because all that I wanted was peace inside.
Therefore, with time going by quickly, the sun was setting in the west. So I had to return back home. I would never forget such romantic experience, which was really beyond
description.
答案:第二句:come→came; relaxing→relaxed
第三句:While→When; its→my
第五句:clear→clearly
第六句:grasses→grass; with→at
第七句:Therefore→However
第八句:去掉back
第九句:such后加a
【七】
Last summer vacation, I went back to my hometown to visit my grandparent. They had several cows in their yard. One day, one of them were ill, but it didn’t want take any medicine. An animal doctor came and gave it an injection. After a while, and it seemed to be better, so I decided to feed it anything. I fed it carrots, which were cutting into small pieces. I also fed it milk powder with pills in them, just as a doctor told me. Although looking after an ill cow was a tired job, I felt a sense of achievement as it begins to recover.
答案:第一句:grandparent→grandparents
第三句:were→was; take前加to
第五句:去掉and; anything→something
第六句:cutting→cut
第七句:them→it; a→the
第八句:tired→tiring; begins→began
【八】
I am a student in Senior Three. Though I am busy with my study, I often imagine what my life will be like in the ten years. I will have graduated from the university by now. I hope I will find a job in an advertisement company which I will enjoy my work and get along well to my colleagues. I will do my best in whenever I do. I will get married and have my own family filling with love and happiness. I will keep the habit of taking regular exercises, such
as running, swimming or various ball games. During my holidays, I would travel to my dreamlands. In a word, my life will be much richer and colorful.
答案:第二句:去掉the
第三句:now→then
第四句:which→where; to→with
第五句:whenever→whatever
第六句:filling→filled
第七句:exercises→exercise; or→and
第八句:would→will
第九句:and后加more
【九】
After school, I was about to enter into my apartment when I saw a little dirty dog lie beside the dustbin. He looked extremely weak. Immediately the homeless dog filled me of sympathy. So I decided to take him home. I gave him some food and a bath. After the bath he looked energy and refreshed. What a lovely dog! When my parents got home, I asked that I could keep the dog. To my surprised and joy, they agreed. Up to now, he has become member of our family and everyone had enjoyed his company. Looked at the cute and happy dog today, I realize that I was right to help him. I offered him a shelter and he brought ourselves great happiness and laughter.
答案:第一句:去掉into; lie→lying
第三句:of→with
第六句:energy→energetic
第八句:that→whether/if
第九句:surprised→surprise
第十句:become后加a; had→has
第十一句:Looked→Looking
第十二句:ourselves→us
【十】
Hi Eva,
Sorry that I haven’t been in the touch for a while. But I catch a cold last week, and I’ve been in bed for four day. I’m feeling better today. Lucky my classes won’t start till next week.
I have good news. I’m going to a conference in you town in May, from 16th to 20th. Could you recommend a hotel where is in the centre of the town? It needs to be somewhere not too expensive because the tight budget. I’ll have a freely halfday for sightseeing. Do you think you can showed me around?
Looking forward to hear from you soon.
Chris
答案:第一句:去掉the
第二句:catch→caught; day→days
第四句:Lucky→Luckily
第六句:you→your
第七句:where→that/which
第八句:because后加of
第九句:freely→free
第十句:showed→show
第十一句:hear→hearing