【英语】2020届二轮复习书面表达训练学案之一书信（咨询信假日活动） 6页

‎2020届二轮复习书面表达训练学案之一 书信（咨询信+假日活动）‎ 范文学习 ‎ 范文：‎ Dear Sir/ Madam,‎ I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. I’ve seen your ad, and I’d like to know something more about your six-week English course. First when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class. I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included Would there be host family or university dormitory?‎ I am looking forward to your early reply. ‎ Yours faithfully,‎ Li Hua 假定你是李华，计划暑假间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况（箭头所指内容）‎ ‎ ‎ 范文抄写：‎ 句型提示：‎ ‎1、书信功能句：‎ ‎2、英语作文万能句：‎ ‎1）I am writing to you to …(谈写信目的)‎ ‎ 2) I am looking forward to your reply. （写信结束语）‎ ‎ 3) I would appreciate it if you could … 如果你能…，我将非常感激。‎ ‎ 4) I wonder if you could … 我想您是否能….‎ ‎ 5) Would it be possible for you to …? 您是否可以。。。？‎ ‎ 6) Would it be convenient for you to …? 您是否方便…?‎ ‎ 7) I would like to … 我想要…‎ ‎ 8) It would be better for you to … 您最好…‎ ‎ 9) You might as well … 您最好…‎ ‎ 10) If I were you, I would …. 如果我是你，我会…‎ ‎ 11） Would you please …? Could you …? 请您…‎ ‎3、英语作文常用句式：‎ ‎ 1) 主+谓+…,doing/done …‎ ‎ 2) 主+谓+…,which/who 从句 ‎ 3）主，同位语，+谓+…‎ ‎ 4）主+谓+…,with 结构 ‎ 5）What +从句 is that 从句 ‎ 6）强调句或倒装句（起强调作用，需要强调时，用）‎ ‎ 7）其他：so/such …that…; It is …before …; too … to …等 作文仿写 ‎ 写作训练（1）‎ Difference?‎ ‎(1)‎ ‎ 假设你是李华，寒假期间你准备和家人去香港迪斯尼乐园游玩。你想了解有关订票方面的具体情况，例如：可否在网上订票？团体购票是否可以打折？可否因故取消订票？你在互联网上查到了一份门票价格表（见下表），但还有些具体信息不明确。请给迪斯尼乐园发一封信，询问有关情况。‎ Ticket Prices ‎□Regular ‎□Peak ‎□Special Adults HK $ 295‎ HK $ 350‎ HK $ 350‎ Children ‎(aged 3 to 11)‎ HK $ 210‎ HK $ 250‎ HK $ 250‎ Seniors ‎(65 or over )‎ HK $ 170‎ HK $ 200‎ HK $ 200‎ Children under 3?‎ 参考词汇：取消cancel 折扣 discount 要求：词数100左右；可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。注意：信的开头与结尾已给出。‎ ‎[思路点拨]‎ 题材：书信； 时态：一般现在时 人称：第一人称 要点提示：（１）寒假期间你准备和家人去香港迪斯尼乐园游玩， （２）你想了解有关订票方面的具体情况； （３）可否在网上订票； （４）团体购票是否可以打折； （５）可否因故取消订票； （６） 盼望尽快回音 篇章结构：文章可分两段 重点句型使用：I wonder whether… Is it possible for sb to do sth? I’d like to know if…‎ 第一稿 Dear Sir / Madam, ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Yours, ‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎ 第二稿 Dear Sir / Madam, ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Yours, ‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎ 第三稿 Dear Sir / Madam, ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ Yours, ‎ ‎ Li Hua ‎ One possible version:‎ Dear Sir / Madam My family are planning a visit to Hong Kong Disneyland this winter vacation. I’ve got some information about the ticket prices on the Internet and now I’m writing for some detailed information.‎ I wonder whether children under 3 need to pay for a ticket and what is the difference between a peak day ticket and a special day ticket. Is it possible for us to get a discount if we buy tickets as a group? Can we book tickets through the Internet? Besides, I’d like to know if we are allowed to cancel our ticket bookings if we cannot make the trip for personal reasons.‎ I am looking forward to your reply Yours,‎ Li Hua