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2019 届二轮复习短文改错模拟试题 10 篇训练之三十二
[一]
I left home at 17 and pay my own way through college. In the past 20
years, I have worked for everything I needed. So it shocks me what some
people in their 20s,still get their life supported by our parents. Some
of these parents have difficult supporting their families.
It’s true that the job market is much more harder these days.
Therefore, there are certainly some ways to make living on our own. Even
if our parents is nice enough to pay for our college, we shouldn’t burden
them with our problems. We should be financial responsible adults, made
our parents proud of us.
答案
I left home at 17 and my own way through college. In the past 20 years,
I have worked for everything I needed. So it shocks me some people in
their 20s,still get their life supported by parents. Some of these
parents have supporting their families.
It’s true that the job market is much
mor
e
harder these days., there are certainly some ways to make living
on our own. Even if our parents nice enough to pay for our college, we
shouldn’t burden them with our problems. We should be responsible
adults, our parents proud of us.
[二]
Mao Zhaomu drop out of high school several years ago. Now the
self-taught English learner has been admitted to one of China’s top
foreign language university, Sichuan International Studies University,
that he used to deliver food to students. Mao once worked a delivery man
for a restaurant. And he chatted happy with English learners online during
her spare time. There were much grammatical mistakes, but that didn’t
prevent him from chatting. To seize every chance to study English ,he would
memorize words while wait for customers. Mao said that how he hoped very
much to become an interpreter. Whoever have a dream and dares to seek it
is the loveliest person.
答案
Mao Zhaomu out of high school several years ago. Now the self-taught
English learner has been admitted to one of China’s top foreign
language ,Sichuan International Studies University, he used to deliver
food to students. Mao once worked a delivery man for a restaurant. And
he chatted with English learners online during spare time. There were
grammatical mistakes, but that didn’t prevent him from chatting. To seize
every chance to study English, he would memorize words while for
customers. Mao said that
ho
w
he hoped very much to become an interpreter. Whoever a dream and
dares to seek it is the loveliest person.
[三]
Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Some
mentioned the inspired Chinese Dream being put forward by President Xi.
And others talked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese
Dream. We all believed that this dream would come true in the future. I
also talked about my own dream. I had always wanted to be a doctor. Not
only can doctors save people’s life but also they are doing a respectable
job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life without their
professional knowledge. To realize my dream, I can work hard from now on.
I must learn as much as I can get into a good medical college, where I
can prepare myself adequate for the job of a doctor.
I believe hard work is that it takes to accomplish my goal.
答案
Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream.Some
mentioned the Chinese Dream
bei
ng
put forward by President Xi. And others talked enthusiastically
about understanding of the Chinese Dream. We all believed that this dream
would come true in the future. I also talked about my own dream. I always
wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people’s but also they
are doing a respectable job. Doctors can also help people to live a better
life their professional knowledge. To realize my dream, I work hard
from now on. I must learn as much as I can get into a good medical college,
where I can prepare myself for the job of a doctor.
I believe hard work is it takes to accomplish my goal.
[四]
Last Saturday I went camping with several friends. In the later
afternoon, we put up our tent in the middle of a field. Then we cooked
a meal over an open fire. The food smelt good. After a meal, we told story
and played games by the camp fire. At the eleven o’clock we felt tired
but we put out the fire and got into our tent. Lie in our warm sleeping
bags, we slept soundly.
At midnight one boy woke up and began shouting. The tent was full water!
We got out of our sleeping bags and hurried outside. It was raining heavy.
A stream had formed in the field, that wound its way across the field and
flow under our tent.
答案
Last Saturday I went camping with several friends. In the afternoon,
we put up our tent in the middle of a field. Then we cooked a meal over
an open fire. The food smelt good. After meal, we told and played games
by the camp fire. At
t
h
e
eleven o’clock we felt tired we put out the fire and got into our
tent. in our warm sleeping bags, we slept soundly.
At midnight one boy woke up and began shouting. The tent was full
water! We got out of our sleeping bags and hurried outside. It was
raining .A stream had formed in the field, wound its way across the field
and under our tent.
[五]
I do well in school, so people think I am smart. But it’s not true.
In fact, three year ago I struggled in Grade 9.Later,I decide to get
serious about school and made a little changes. First, I decided I would
become interesting in whatever was being taught, regardless of that what
other people thought. I also made up my mind to work hardly every day.
After carry out these changes, I became active participant in classroom
discussions. Then my test scores began to rise. How exciting! It seems
to myself that being smart is simple a matter of making efforts and being
interested.
答案
I do well in school, so people think I am smart. But it’s not true.
In fact, three ago I struggled in Grade 9.Later,I to get serious about
school and made a changes. First, I decided I would become in whatever
was being taught, regardless of
th
at
what other people thought. I also made up my mind to work every day.
After out these changes, I became active participant in classroom
discussions. Then my test scores began to rise. How exciting! It seems
to that being smart is a matter of making efforts and being interested.
[六]
Last Saturday our class went hiking in a countryside. We meet at our
school gate and set off at 8:00am.On the way, we were singing and laughing
happily while a girl suddenly fell into a deep hole. She felt so
frightening and even burst into tears. One of my classmate found a long
rope and we finally got him out. Fortunately, she didn’t suffer seriously
injuries, but it seemed that her ankle slightly twisted. We managed to
sending her to the nearest hospital. It is an experience we’ll never
forget it, though we didn’t enjoy ourselves very much that day.
答案
Last Saturday our class went hiking in countryside. We at our school
gate and set off at 8:00am.On the way, we were singing and laughing happily
a girl suddenly fell into a deep hole. She felt so and even burst into
tears. One of my found a long rope and we finally got out. Fortunately,
she didn’t suffer injuries, but it seemed that her ankle slightly
twisted. We managed to her to the nearest hospital. It is an experience
we’ll never forget
i
t
,though we didn’t enjoy ourselves very much that day.
[七]
People used to communicate with each other through letters and public
phones. So nowadays they use mobile phones and the Internet instead of.
This change in communication have good effects on our works and life.
Comparing with letters and public phones, mobile phones and the Internet
are fast and much more convenient. If you missed your grandmother, you
just take out your phone and say “hello” to him. And she will be happy
to hear your voice. If you want to place order with a foreign company,
you can email the message. It'll be minutes after you get their reply.
第二句：So→But; 去掉 of
第三句：have→has; works→work
第四句：Comparing→Compared; fast→faster
第五句：missed→miss; him→her
第七句：place 后加 an
第八句：after→before
【八】
Recently I have done a survey on the hobbies of the 1,500 students
in our school.
The result showed that over 40% of them are fond of playing musical
instruments in their spare time because it can improve their life quality.
About 35% enjoy surf the Internet, which helps them know about world affair.
That surprises me most is that the number of the students paid much
attention to reading and doing sports is smaller. Each only makes up for
12%, although one is the best way to gain knowledge and other is to keep
fit.
However, more students are strongly advised to take on reading as
knowledge is power. Plus, they should take an active part in sports and
develop other hobbies proper besides entertainment.
第二句：showed→shows
第三句：surf→surfing; affair→affairs
第四句：第一个 That→What; paid→paying
第五句：去掉 for; other 前加 the
第六句：However→Therefore; on→up
第七句：proper→properly
【九】
Last weekend, I went to visit my grandparents with Dad. On way back,
we met so much red lights that Dad shut down the engine to save gas.
Unfortunate, when the lights turn green, Dad couldn't start the car again.
Stuck on the traffic, we didn't know what to do.
Just then, a car stopped on the right side, and the driver was offered
to help push our car to the roadside. We were so grateful. With his car
preventing other car passing, he and I pushed his car aside as Dad
controlled the wheel in the car.
Dad thanked the driver but soon Dad's friends came to our rescue,
restart our car with new batteries.
第二句：On 后加 the; much→many
第三句：Unfortunate→Unfortunately; turn→turned
第四句：on→in
第五句：去掉 was
第七句：car→cars; 第二个 his→our
第八句：but→and; restart→restarting
【十】
I can still remember I was once asked to make speech before the whole
class at the age of 9. You can imagine how shy I was when I thought of
that with so many eyes fixed to me. I had no more choice but to prepare
for it, though. The hardest part was my oral presentation from my memory,
for reading from the paper wasn't allowing. The real moment began before
I stood on the platform with my legs trembling or my mind blank. But my
listeners were waiting patient. Gradually, I found me back, giving my
speech at last. After what seemed to be a long time, I heard all the
listeners applauding loudly. Ever since then, my fear of speak before the
audience had disappeared. Actually, now I've become a great speaker!
第一句：speech 前加 a
第二句：to→on/upon
第三句：去掉 more
第四句：allowing→allowed
第五句：before→when/as/after; or→and
第六句：patient→patiently
第七句：me→myself
第九句：speak→speaking; had→has