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2020
届二轮复习 书面表达中专题二 简单句的转换与训练
在一篇短文中,如果句子结构要么是“主谓宾”,要么是“主系表”,则显得很单调,读起来乏味。若对简单句进行一下转换,使其主语灵活,句子结构活泼,则给人的感觉就大不一样。
简单句之间的转换有下面三种方法:
一、转换句子结构
[
例
]
李东住在南方。他的家乡经常下雨。
一般:
Li Dong lives in the south.It often rains in his hometown.
较好:
Li Dong is from the south.There is a lot of rain in his hometown.
[
分析
]
“一般表达”中的两个句子均是“主谓”结构,比较单调。把它们分别转换为“主系表”结构和
there be
句型后,句子就显得比较活泼。
[
例
]
你每天帮我学英语。你太好了!
一般:
You help me study English every day. You are very kind.
较好:
It's very kind of you to help me learn English every day.
较好:
How kind of you to help me learn English every day!
[
分析
]
“一般表达”句子之间的关系松散,转换为
it
作形式主语或感叹句后句子读起来很流畅。
二、转换句型
写作中常用于转换的三个重点句型:
1
.
there be
句型
there be
句型也是简单句中的一种常用句型,在作文中经常使用。在
there be
句型中,有时
there be
还可以换用
there seems/seemed to be(
似乎有
)
,
there happened to be(
碰巧有
)
,
there may/might be(
也许有
)
,
there must be(
肯定有
)
,
there can't be(
不可能有
)
,
there ought to/should be(
应该有
)
等。
我家有五口人。
There are five people in my family.
操场上碰巧有很多人。
There happened to be a lot of people on the playground.
2
.感叹句
感叹句是作文中很有用的一种句型,常见的感叹句有两种:
[
句型
1]
What
+
(
冠词
)
+形容词+名词+主谓结构+感叹号
[
句型
2]
How
+形容词或副词+主谓结构+感叹号
What an interesting film (it is)!
=
How interesting a film (it is)!
3
.强调句型
强调句型也是作文中常用的一种句型,强调句型的结构是:
It is/was
+被强调部分+
that/who
+原句其他部分。
I met my friend in the street yesterday.
→It was I who/that met my friend in the street yesterday. (
强调主语
)
→It was my friend that I met in the street yesterday. (
强调宾语
)
→It was in the street that I met my friend yesterday. (
强调地点状语
)
→It was yesterday that I met my friend in the street. (
强调时间状语
)
注意:强调时间和地点时,不能用
when
或
where
,要用
that
。
三、转换词语
[
例
]
杰克是我们学校的学生。他学习特别努力。
一般:
Jack studies in our school. He studies very hard.
较好:
Jack studies in our school. He works hard at his lessons.
[
分析
]
“一般表达”中的谓语重复使用
study
,显得呆板。词语转换后,句子就“活”起来了,读起来有滋有味。
[
例
]
妈妈匆匆忙忙去上班,连早餐都没吃。
一般:
Mother went to work in a hurry. She didn't have breakfast.
较好:
Mother went to work in a hurry without having breakfast.
[
分析
]
“一般表达”中的两个简单句之间关系松散,使用介词短语进行转换后使句子内部结构紧凑,读起来一气呵成。