高中英语人教版必修4测试：Unit3 Section Ⅳ　Writing 5页

www.ks5u.com Section Ⅳ　Writing 如何写幽默故事 普通表达——常用词汇　普通句式　让学生写作思路“活”起来 任务呈现 请你观察下图，然后写一篇100词左右的英语短文，讲述今天下午在你们物理课上发生在小华身上的一件事。‎ 参考词汇：目瞪口呆dumbfounded 写作指导 一、审题定调 写作要求是写一则幽默有趣的故事，记叙发生在课堂上的一件趣事。写作时应注意下面几点：‎ ‎1．确定文体：这是一篇记叙文。写作时注意记叙文的写作特点。‎ ‎2．主体时态：文章应以一般________为主。‎ ‎3．主体人称：由于是叙述发生在课堂上的一件趣事，所以人称应该以第三人称为主。‎ 二、谋篇布局 本文应分为三部分。‎ 第一部分：对小华的简介；‎ 第二部分：对这两幅画所含信息的详细描述；‎ 第三部分：这位物理老师对小华的回答所作出的反应以及该回答在班级内产生的结果。‎ 三、组织语言 第一部分：对小华的简介。‎ ‎1．小华是个非常淘气的男孩子，有时候也有点幽默。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ 第二部分：对这两幅画所含信息的详细描述。‎ ‎2．当被提问时，小华只是站在那里，一言不发。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎3．陈老师指着黑板上的问题，耐心地问他。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ 第三部分：这位物理老师对小华的回答所作出的反应以及该回答在班级内产生的结果。‎ ‎4．听了这话，陈老师是目瞪口呆，全班哄堂大笑。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ 四、连句成篇 ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎ 我的写作体会：________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ 高级表达——精彩词汇　句式升级　让学生满分作文“易”起来 任务呈现 结合下面的提要，写一篇100个词左右的幽默故事。‎ ‎1．一个过度肥胖的妇女找医生，想寻求减肥的方法；‎ ‎2．医生建议她吃谷物和蔬菜两天，然后隔一天(skip a day)，再反复如此两周；‎ ‎3．一段时间后，她减肥将近20磅，医生很吃惊；‎ ‎4．秘诀：跳跃。‎ 写作步骤 一、统筹安排 体裁 记叙文 话题 一则幽默小故事 时态 一般________时 人称 第____人称 结构 开始：妇女需要减肥，寻找医生的建议 发展：医生提出建议，妇女按医嘱减肥 结局与高潮：减肥成功，出乎医生意料 二、词语储备 ‎1．________________　　　　　对……满意 ‎2．________________ 令人感到惊讶的 ‎3．________________ 尤其是 ‎4．________________ 指示，说明 三、备用句型罗列 ‎1．医生建议她吃谷物和蔬菜两天，然后隔一天(skip a day)，再反复如此两周。(advise sb. to do sth.)‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________.‎ ‎2．下次我见你时，你会至少减去5磅。(next time 引导时间状语从句)‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________.‎ ‎3．一个过度肥胖的妇女找她的医生，想寻求减肥的方法。她的医生让她节食。‎ A terribly overweight woman went to ask her doctor about ways of losing weight. Her doctor put her on a diet. (and连接并列句)‎ ‎→A terribly overweight woman went to ask her doctor about ways of losing weight，________________________________________________________________________.‎ ‎4．一段时间后，当她回来时，她减肥将近20磅，医生很吃惊。‎ Some time later, when she returned she shocked the doctor ____________________________.(v.ing作结果状语)‎ ‎→Some time later, when she returned she lost nearly 20 pounds, ________________________.‎ 四、扩充要点，连词成句 The Perfect Diet ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ 我的写作体会：________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ 写作训练 一、根据下面的提示，用英语写一则幽默故事。‎ 一对夫妇发现了一只企鹅，他们不知道该怎么办，于是让警察来帮忙。警察让他们带企鹅到动物园去。第二天警察看到他们仍然与企鹅在一起，就问他们为什么昨天没有把企鹅送到动物园，他们说昨天他们把企鹅带到了动物园，今天要去电影院，明天去游泳池。‎ 注意：‎ ‎1．词数100左右；‎ ‎2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。‎ 参考词汇：企鹅penguin ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ 二、某英文网站开展了主题为“Humorous Stories”的征文活动，请你用英语写一则幽默故事，然后向该网站投稿。‎ 注意：词数120左右。‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ ‎________________________________________________________________________‎ Section Ⅳ　Writing 一测　基础过关 写作指导 一、审题定调 ‎2．过去时 三、组织语言 ‎1．Xiao Hua is really a naughty boy, who is sometimes even a bit humorous.‎ ‎2．When he was asked，Xiao Hua just stood there without saying a word.‎ ‎3．Miss Chen asked him patiently and at the same time pointed to the question on the blackboard.‎ ‎4．Hearing this，Miss Chen was left dumbfounded and the whole class burst into laughter.‎ 四、连句成篇 Xiao Hua is really a naughty boy, who is sometimes even a bit humorous.He always gives us a surprise in and out of class.This afternoon，Miss Chen, our new physics teacher，raised a question.When asked，Xiao Hua just stood there without saying a word.“Is this question difficult？” Miss Chen asked him patiently, pointing to the question on the blackboard.He looked at the question and then shook his head before he gave a surprising answer，“No，Miss Chen, but the answer is！” Hearing this，Miss Chen was left dumbfounded and the whole class burst into laughter.‎ 二测　能力提升 写作步骤 一、统筹安排 ‎　过去　三 二、词语储备 ‎1．be content with　2.astonishing　3.particularly　4.directions 三、备用句型罗列 ‎1．Doctor advised her to eat vegetables and grains for 2 days, then skip a day, and do it like this for 2 weeks ‎2．Next time I see you, you will have lost at least 5 pounds ‎3．and her doctor put her on a diet ‎4．by losing nearly 20 pounds　making her doctor shocked 四、扩充要点，连词成句 The Perfect Diet A terribly overweight woman went to ask her doctor about ways of losing weight, and her doctor put her on a diet.‎ ‎“I advise you to eat vegetables and grains for 2 days, then skip a day, and do it like this for 2 weeks.You'd better not eat too much meat, particularly pork.Next time I see you, you will have lost at least 5 pounds.You will be content with you”．‎ However, when the woman returned, she shocked the doctor by losing nearly 20 pounds.‎ ‎“Why, that's astonishing！”the doctor said.“Did you follow my directions？”‎ The woman nodded，“To tell you the truth, I thought I was going to drop dead on the third day.”‎ ‎“From hunger, you mean？”‎ ‎“No，from skipping.”‎ 三测　学业达标 写作训练 一、One possible version：‎ A couple found a penguin.Neither of them knew what to do with it.So they decided to ask a policeman for help.They looked around and found a policeman and asked him for advice.“Well，” said the policeman，“I think you should take it to the zoo.” “What a good idea，” said the couple together.‎ The next day the policeman saw the couple again.They were still with the penguin and he was rather surprised.“Why didn't you take the penguin to the zoo as I suggested yesterday？” he asked them.“We did，” they said，“and today we are going to the cinema.Tomorrow we will go to the swimming pool.”‎ 二、One possible version：‎ Two hunters, Otis and Elmer, got a pilot to fly them into the Canadian wilderness where they managed to bag two big deer.‎ As they were loading the plane to return, the pilot said the plane could take only the hunters, and one deer. The hunters disagreed, saying, “Last year we shot two, and the pilot let us take them both... and he had exactly the same airplane as yours.” Finally the pilot gave in and everything was loaded.‎ However, even under full power, the little plane couldn't handle the load and went down, crashing in the wooded wilderness.‎ Somehow, Otis and Elmer survived the crash. After climbing out, Otis asked, “Any idea where we are？” Elmer replied, “I think we're pretty close to where we crashed last year.”‎